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Harry stood looking at the place where the bus had just been for a moment before starting back to Number four. As he turned toward the house, he smiled and then began to whistle very softly. If he hadn't been whistling, he might have heard the voice of a cloak-covered female with chartreuse-colored hair whisper happily from beside the garden wall, “Happy birthday, Harry. You've just given yourself the best present of all.” who is the woman? no idea what ur talking about there. guess i'm just a lil stupid. lol. |
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pstibbonsSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/01/07
That was pretty enjoyable - glad Hermione made the first move, since she clearly needed to - and glad Harry made the second. |
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luv4booksUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/12/06
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Tank03Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/10/06
I've read this story about two dozen times now. It's just such a perfect bit of fluff that really hits the spot on a dreary Monday morning at work. Thanks so much for sharing it! |
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Aww that was sooooo sweet. I love the Two- Way mirrors you used in the story. I wish I had a pair. |
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SabineSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/01/06
I love stories that make me grin like an idiot through the whole thing, and that's what I did when Hermione showed up. Again, you write Harry and Hermione so well, more like the characters I know in my head, as opposed to the shadows of their former selves JKR's let them become. I am so lucky to have found your author page! |
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Very sweet, thanks for writing it. You made my day a bit brighter. -Bob |
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LieSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/01/05
Very sweet!
As always just the right dose fluff ;-)
Can't get enough of your stories
 Lie |
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KcluvsMlUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/01/05
Huh? Who was the lady in the shadows? Oh, well. Anyway, great story! I loved it! 'Twas so fluffy! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/12/04
i dont get it? who was that woman?  please mention it somewhere |
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Very cute and I loved the ending. It was very sweet. Oh, the fluff! Gotta love it! |
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Oh how sweet, are you going to develop this story. I know in summary you said it was a one shot fan fiction piece, but you should consider writing a sequal. Maybe about their sixth year at hogwarts. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/12/04
So cute! I especially loved Harry and Hermione's first kiss...  Keep writing!!!! |
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liliezSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/12/04
yay another lovely fic from you! love reading your stories. thanks for this one... short, very very sweet. lovely lovely read.... thanks again! |
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TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO CUTE!!
GASP! I can't believe I never read this before! What a loser am I? It's been a hectic time. Loved it profusely. Write more- as always.
*kiss kiss*
Faith |
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