"scale of one to ten? ... right, eleven, i always knew he'd be a good kisser!" LOL! i love it! |
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Great ending! You did a marvelous job with this story! Great, emotional ending! I really don't know what else to say, but great job! Can't wait to read more of your stories,
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I like this story much...it's really good. good job.
Aphroditee |
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well this story is progressing nicely i just wish i knew where you got it all from i have alot of story ideas in my head but cant seem able to put them down on paper.
Aphroditee |
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ooo and the plot thickens. good chapter now...on to the next
Aphroditee |
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This is a cute and sweet chapter i like it much.
Aphroditee |
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This is a good chapter i can't wait to read more!
Aphroditee |
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HermioneUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/01/05
I know that I already reviewed but I didn't have enough time to tell everything. I loved your beginning and how Harry and Hermione are destined to marry. I love your detail and how you used Fred and George and Harry's mum. I also liked how you described it when ever they kissed  I also enjoyed how Harry "swept" Hermione off her feet. I just have one piece of advice for you:Keep up the GREAT work. You may end up a great author like JK Rowling |
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GK ErenSigned | Chapter : 24 | Date : 19/01/05
Very Beautiful. I didn't expect that to be the end. Don't get me wrong I love the way you ended it, I just thought there would be another chapter of it. |
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HermioneUnsigned | Chapter : 24 | Date : 19/01/05
Wonderful story and ending!Good job with Fred and George  I wouldn't be surprised if you ended up like JK Rowling some day! You did an amazing job with the story plot and with the foretold yet chosen ending of Harry and Hermione. (I really liked when Harry "swept" Hermione off her feet)
Keep up the good work |
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Oh my goodness! That was really beautiful, him pouring out his heart like that! Awesome ending, I think it fit the story perfectly! Nice work, can't wait for the next story! |
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KcluvsMlUnsigned | Chapter : 24 | Date : 18/01/05
Yes, it was a great ending! I loved this story! How fluffy-ish the end was, i just loved it! |
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Love4HPSigned | Chapter : 24 | Date : 18/01/05
No it cant be the end, that was soo romantic!!!  I was crying at teh last part of Harrys declaration and im sure that others would agree that afollow up into teh future like graduating hogworts would be awesome cause they are still young. Thank you for an amazing reading experience and email me if you start any new pieces! |
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barandaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/01/05
A very good chapter, it is emotional but not too much. I will read the next chapters, and elaborate my review... |
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barandaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/01/05
A very good chapter, it is emotional but not too much. I will read the next chapters, and elaborate my review... |
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