Love this tale and Lily being able to come back and at least talk to Harry like she talked to Hermione to get her ready for that battle was really great. Great tale very well told

Absolutely terrific story. I love all of the background details you thought up about the protection charm and everything leading up to the final battle, and the way you narrated the story, telling important things mostly in snippets, flashbacks and the events from harry or hermione's perspective of what had happened. The best part of the story is how well it came together as a whole. You explained everything perfectly, nothing was left out, and it made perfect sense. Keep it up!

great story! SAD, BUT THEN SWEET AND I LOVE HOW D STORY GOES GREAT JOB!!! KIP IT UP!

Wow. Everything about this story was brilliant. Everything from teh creation of the Black Curse to the book telling the two their fates to Lily appearing at the lake. I simply could not stop laughing at the twins hitting on Lily. Well done.
-Skylar

OMG!!!! what more can I say it was simply wickedly awesome one of the best i've read, and I read A LOT!

Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful! One of the best h/hr fics I've ever read (and I've read quite a few)! Thank you very much for writing that. I don't think a relationship between the two has been defined ever better. Congradulations on its completion.

Congratulations for an excellent story, very well written...
Perfect, just perfect...
Keep writing like this...

Wow...that was amazing!!! This was the first Harry Potter fanfiction I have ever read and now im afraid all the others will never compare to the greatness of this one! Yay Menucha!!

i LOVED ur story!!!! ...lol, really great job!!!! i just wish u didnt hav to stop here, its too good! i think that u should continue a little bit with this...but it was fantastic! i really really liked it!!! great job! see if u can write a little more ... u know, like continue it a little more! lol, but it is still just as good leaving it here! great job!!!!

I really like the story so far, its really good. Theres alot of mystery but its really captivating. Keep up the good work

Great ending to an awesome story. I agree that the chapters were short, but in the end, everything was said!

Aww....This story took me 2 hours to read, but I love it . Lol...good job writing this, you're a terrific author!

os ot finished? but, but.... what about the wedding and al? you can't just *stop* writing now! Please!!!

OMG i'm gonna cry!! that is whoa the sweetest thing ever!!!!! i love it!

"scale of one to ten? ... right, eleven, i always knew he'd be a good kisser!" LOL! i love it!