That was a sweet story. Haley is quite touchy, but well she's a twelf year old girl, I think she's supposed to be touchy. Harry was really sensitive with her when he told her the reason why he wants to show Hermione how much he loves her every day. I think when Haley is a few years older she will like the thought that her parents love each other so much. This can not be taken for granted and she'll probably glad to have her parents as a role model for relationships when she's older.

Wow, I'll be surprised if my teeth didn't all rot away. In all seriousness, I really liked how you captured H/Hr's relationship into their older years (probably late 30's). Authors on here very rarely seem to show their life with older kids. I really didn't think the smut at the end was well put at all. It seemed that you just added it for the rating.

Wow! I love the lifelikeness in this. Such an amazing job!

Wow! I love the lifelikeness in this. Such an amazing job!

Hey. Imagine if one of the kids walks in when their parents are going at it? (ooo...)

I loved it! it had good moments,sad moments,and funny moments!

That was soooo sweet! I can see that happening, somewhat!.... Merry Christmas! Emerald.

Really cool! i loved it. I think you are a fantastis writer and i'll be looking out for anymore of your stories!

That was amazing, so sweet.I loved the little talk they had with Haley.Loved James, he's such a guy lol..Exellent work

~Rach

awwww again CUTE

that was so romantic its lovely to see that they have been together for 15 years and still be that in love i hope im like that when i get married

"Say the Words" has prompted me to read other things by you. I really liked this one. It would be terribly difficult to live up to the reputation of Harry and Hermione Potter. And to live in a household that is so full of emotion is a wonderful thing, but it's a bit strange when you're at that age to see your parents like that. Wonderful job capturing all of that!!

how sweet!
haven't seen anything lke this before.
fitting title as well!
I think I'll just have to go and check out your other work now, really....

That was a great little story. The detail about the silencing charm made me think, it would be so nice to be able to that, what with three small children at home. Oh well, back to reality.
I really liked the way you wrote their kids, very realistic.

hey, that was a good story. You are a really good writer. How old are you? well, ne ways..i hope you keep writing.
-rmp

The story is wonderful. Very good details, lol! Keep working on it.