I think that this is a really nice short story. You did a good job with how Hermione was feeling and what she was thinking.

Aww! At first I was confused.. (it's one o'clock.. you would be too!) There seemed to be no transition between speakers. But I like it, and adding transitions would ruin it! Thanks for your kind review!

very nice! i am a huuuuuuuuuge harry/hermione shipper so thanks!!!

very nice! i am a huuuuuuuuuge harry/hermione shipper so thanks!!!

That was really sweet with just a hint of angst. It was great! I couldn't help but think that, in this, Harry and Hermione are a couple of 'old souls' who've known each other for many lifetimes. Great fic!

Beautiful. I've been in love before. It's always hardest when you don't kow if she loves you back, or worse...she doesn't. Alorkin

Well, that tackled quite well the feeling of being in love in general, from anyone's point of view I guess, although I have to admit that after something so pure I really wish you hadn't put your author's note, it was kind of anticlimatic. Besides that, it was really rather perfect.

Pearl

That was very heart warming...You did a very good job of describing love...LOVE is very...hard to explain..especially in writing...I especially liked that you wrote it from personal experience it just made the story more special..because someone actually felt this emotions...I think I'm too young to know what love is...but it might just hit me like a ton of bricks..in a few days, months, even years.... and you never know I might remember what you wrote in here and say yeah, your right GREAT JOB!!

i love it... it's so sweet!!! i wish i could tell a certain someone exactly what you wrote... YOU ARE AMAZING!!!

HEY, don't forget that this is like partly me too. I didnt know that when you wanted to know what it is like being in love that you would use that or like write this so much about me as well. I am serious you got like so close to being me there for a minute. Most of my journal entries are deep like this. I applaud you Sarah! I lvoe this...may i borrow it?

Jenna

Oy I understand what ur sayin. it was very good, I enjoyed it.. keep up the good work

omg. i'm serious when i say this. But i honestly feel the same way. i think i'm also in love with my best friend. I'm like in shock right now. But he's always been there for me, and i never really could describe how i feel about him. but thank you soo much for writing this. I'm in love with Preston. wow. and youre right. love is the most amazing feeling in the world. i have to tell him, i think i've kept my feelings from him long enough. Thank you so much Sarahmay. You just made me realize my feelings for my best friend. wow....

yeah- that was cool. it rele did apply to life. writting is a great way to get things off of ur chest- i know- trust me. keep writting and keep updating at Portkey!

Good job! i liked it too, iu've fond that writting fanfic is a great way to get my feelings out... good job!

Very good. I loved it, very short, very poignant, just very sweet. Makes one wonder if this is actually running through Hermione's head in the actual books. JK doesnt do much for Hermione's thoughts, so I think she is purposefully holding back on us. Anyways, great job and congratulations on a fantastic read!

Thanks, Shayna