keep up the great work! i can't wait to read more. great job! really love this story.

this is a great storie do you have more like this only longer and do you know any good fanfiction websits that have h/hg h/l for fanfictions

ARE YOUR EVER GOING TO FINISH THIS STORY. YOU MADE RON VERY POSSIVE IN THIS STORY AND IF HERMIONE DOES GET PERGNANT I WANT THE HOLE RIDE

You should keep going with this story it is a really good story so far. I really like it. Please update this story soon.


Harry and Hermione forever!!

hi. just saying that you need to update this. NOW.. really. I love it love it!!!

Why the heck did you stop this one....it's off to SUCH a good start.

You have absolutely got to continue this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Pelas ekekp writing, finish it please. do osmething to end it gilrey its a good fic!!!

I LIKE I LIKE I LIKE, plz keep o nwritng your such an awesome writer, yes i keep telling you this, and itilwll keep tell you it LOL

OMG!!! That was really really good. I give it two thumbs up. You should really write more.


DandyLion

AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! I love how you right your so good! I love harry Potter and truly belive in the whole H/Hr ship. I love how you ended this chapter it was awsome! Can't wait to read the next chapter!

i thought it was great but u could say wot happens next like when they get back to castle and have to talk to Ron or how they get away from voldermort pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee write a nother chapter.

hey i am new to reading sotries on portkey. i really like the basis of this story and was wondering when you were or if you were even going to finish the story. please do finish. ive read all of your stories and a really like them all but i like it even better when they get finished. i hope this gives you inspiration! good luck

excellent story! i enjoyed how you figured on getting harry and hermione into the backseat of a car, albeit the Weasley's old Ford, but still a nicely done scene. were you going to write any more to this story or was this all there was? good writing with some minor errors.

write more damnit! sorry, got frusrtated there. you r my faveorite fanfic author!

please write more! pleasse please please?!?!?!
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