Aja!!!
So you're blackmailing us???
Just kidding... Well I can't say that much just that I feel this whole thing a bit confusing you know??? Nothing bad really, it's just that it seems as if everything is floating on air... I'm not talking about revealing all the surprises you're certanly saving for the end but to try to make the facts land into a line of logic....
Now that's my personal opinion, feel free to send me to hell if you feel like it, but most of anything......
KEEP GOING AND GOOD LUCK!!!
(before you curse me into next year I'd like to point out that aside of what I said (or wrote more like) I really like your story, the plot is interesting and I (like pretty much everyone who begins to read a story, especially if it's good) would like to see the end of it and to see a master piece concluded