dustyroseUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/05/05
Cute story i liked it! I was wondering what he could of said and that makes sense to me! |
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very good competely explains why she kiss's him on the cheak at the station good writing to thanks for the enjoyable read
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ChiSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/05/05
hey,
a really good thing to write about!
this is actually a scene i have wondered about lot while reaking gof. i was like, what were hermione and krum talking about?? and i really liked that it was about harry and not ron...(see, i am a hr/herm. shipper,hate the ron/herm. pairing).
well written^^! |
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2buxSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/03/05
nicely done. i know who ends up with who isn't the most important thing in the series. but as the next 2 books come out, i'll still have my wand ready to hex JK, unless Harry and Hermione atleast figure something out. great work. thanks. |
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This is a very interesting take on the whole Viktor/Hermione relationship, just because JKR leaves it so very open-ended. I enjoyed the fact that you brought up the fact that Hermione talked about Harry a lot, which seems logical, but it doesn't seem logical that she didn't talk about Ron at all to him. He is her friend after all, and given the whole situation between him and Harry during the first parts of GoF, she might need somebody to talk to.
Anyway, it's very nice, and I'm not disappointed as I go onto the next story, except to say that I want *more*. |
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Great one shot, it was about what I thought it would be the way she reacted after he left. |
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Yup, yup, yup!
Definetly was missing in "Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire"
Good! ^_^
~*Eli |
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 Wow that really changes my mind how i feel about hermione. maybe she does love Harry.
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ChelimeSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/01/05
PERFECT!!!
Ah, that was brilliant. There have always been speculations as to what Viktor said to Hermione right before they left Hogwarts. I like to think your speculation is spot on  lol. And I love how you tied in the "something she'd never done before."
This was very well written - not too serious, fairly light-hearted, but not so fluffy that it makes me want to gag. And I think it's brilliant how you made Hermione, the know-it-all, not know something, and seem somewhat offended that someone else had to point it out to her. I found that *quite* humorous.
Anyway, great ficlet. I truly enjoyed it. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/01/05
I think it was a good story. I also think that if Viktor really likes Hermoine then he needs to trust her when she says she only likes Harry for a friend. |
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Cute. I like this little forgotten passage. The cool thing about this is that it's not like those other fanfics where they say "What really happened at the end of GoF" and then go on to re-write or add to the ending so that OotP doesn't fit in or so that everything that JK actually writes after their modifications doesn't fit anymore.
Anyway, awesome!!
And Happy New Year! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/12/04
I think this story was very creative and I had enjoyed it very much its a nice touch to the series and whats soo cool is that it might just have happened in the REAL series .......we will never know(well until we get the rest of the series lol) |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/12/04
wow, it fits so perfect with the story! that could be exactly what rowling was thinking too! good job! |
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"*dialogue from Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire UK Edition p628-629" what do you mean by that? |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/12/04
ok that was boooring you need to add more love in it  |
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