AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/06/07
What a great story. one of the best oneshots I've ever read. Keep up the great jop. |
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luv4booksUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/12/05
wow, your really good at describing how the time went by, that was great! |
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Awww so sweet.  You're a really good author. I like your stories. Please write another one soon. |
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q.thewsSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/09/05
If "a not so ordinary day" was the beauty of an extraodinary day, this is the beauty of an extraordinary life blessed by the simple great thing life it's made of.
Beautiful story, thank you. |
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harry31Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/07/05
 This is a very good story I liked it very much I am waiting for next chapter |
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A really sweet one shot, so nice that Harry was able to have a fulfilling life after the defeat of Voldemort. Happy little fluff. |
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HarrysgrlSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/11/04
aaaawwww, that was cute! you did a very good job. i like simple one shots. they just.... flow. very nice. |
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that was wonderful!!! you did a really great job!!!YAY!! hee hee....that was excellent!
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Awwww! It's so sweet and cute. And you wrote it soooo Good Jennifer! You make it seem so real. Awesome job!
--Jessie |
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Good job! 
Quite inspiring... nice and quiet.
Must read more of your writing... |
Author Feedback: Heh...no you don't, Nadja. And some of my other fics (especially my novel) aren't "nice and quiet." This is one of the rare exceptions.
Thanks for the review!
Jennifer |
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AlorkinUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/11/04
I loved thiws. It was quiet and touching. I'm only 43, but I reminisce about my daughter. I still see her being born, nursing learning to walk. I remember her tears when Her mother and unborn brother died. now she's ten, and I see the beautifu poised and troublesome child she's become. I couldn't wish for better. One day, I will walk her down that aisle(or not...her choice). when that day comes, I will be able to say I've lived my life t it's end. Alorkin |
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Sweet little overview of their life.  Maybe it could have been a few chapters branching out on some things, but as a one-shot, it's good! |
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Misadies1Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/11/04
aww thats sweeet and thats how it always should be well done *claps* good job |
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Very nice, but don't fall into the trap so many authors seem to do; sixty is old for Muggles, but it's not even middle age for wizards. Dumbledore is over 150 and still active. One of the better fics I read made great use of that.
I picture wizards as maturing at the same rate as muggles up through puberty, but once their magic fully matures, the aging process slows to one in three or four, depending on how strong their magic is, which is why Albus at 160 is only biologically around 60 or 70, and could easily live another 40 years or more. Other than that, a nice little fic. |
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