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Really good work, and i can not wait for the next chapter to come out soon hopefully. |
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I really like this chapter. I like how sweet Ginny and Draco are towards each other. I like how she gets the visions. I like the name of the story and the name of this chapter. I have read all your stories on here so far and I like this them all. |
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HarrysgrlSigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 11/03/05
maybe not much, but short and sweet. with a little action.  great job! |
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Rainbow16Signed | Chapter : 6 | Date : 11/03/05
*woots over and over again* Another Chapter! Yay! so happy!
I liked your disclaimer, it is really funny! |
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very good. i think ur a fab author but a word of advice. cut down the americanisms because its an english setting (mom and dad shud be mum and dad) etc. no offence but they arent american but ur still a good story teller |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 27/02/05
YAY!!! this one is longer than the others!!! woohoo, more long chappies!!!! Whew and hew...ok, now i'm done. great chapter |
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UnBushUsSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 26/02/05
i really liked the fanfic comment  good story, just i thought that Draco would not be so fine just sudennly hooking up with "the sister of his worst enemy" so easily
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SawakoUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 26/02/05
ooh, i jus lov ur stories...  really  u r so great in writing such fictional thingy!!!! |
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I love it! Ron and Draco are in that hate/not hate stage, and Ginny is all emotionally unstable, and everyone thinks Draco's gonna die, and Ron and Luna are together. It just needs a little more work on the outside characters. Only, like, five have been introduced so far, and Harry wasn't one of them. So maybe introducing some new characters would be nice. |
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i loved it, it kept me on the edge of my seat, i usually read these stories then go back to editing my site every few minutes, but i couldn't stop reading it... good job, i want the next chapter man!! |
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Rainbow16Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 25/02/05
Oh great chapie! I love how you ended it! It is a big cliffe you us!  oh well I guess...Thatnk-you for finally putting it up!!!!!!!!!!!
~Rainbow16~ |
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hey! that was an awesome story! keep writting and I'll keep reading! TTYL ~Kelsey |
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AWESOME STORY!!!!!!!!!!! kinda confusing, but it is a mystery..... . . . |
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Nicely written!  I loved it I can't wait to see how you make this turn out! update soon |
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I like this chapter. I like how Draco and Ginny are so sweet towards another. I like Ron is trying to be nice to Draco. In a spot where its talking about Ginny didn't sleep for 4 days it should be how not home. Otherwise the story is good. |
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