i really love where this is going and cannot wait for an update

It is getting more and more exciting....i want some more pls

It is getting more and more exciting....i want some more pls

Your story is excellant! Eagle to read more, please continue! Neat Chapter

I like your writing style. Hope to read more. Thank you very much!

good good good very good very good excellant great really great

Hey Gen,
It's Kate, and I figured I should really comment on this, because I just love it - am hoping you will get back to it one of these days. I was re-reading HBP in preparation for DH this week, and was inspired to re-read some of your HP fiction - so here I am!! Anyway - seriously - love how perfectly you have their characters, despite inverting canon, and hoping that you get around to finishing this one of these days!

Toodles

Wow. This is beautiful. You're characters are brilliantly written and I've never read sex like this. Actually, that's the thing. Most people write sex. You haven't. You've written two people making love. There's nothing smutty about it. Its beautiful. It's emotion and love. I've very rarely seen that. And, good grief the tension!!!!
I'm terribly curious what Moony and Remus want. I hope you find the time to come back to this. Thanks for sharing your talents.
S

OMG what an awesome story!!! You keep Harry and Hermione true to the characters! Beautifully written I can't wait to read more of your work! Keep up the good work

Nicely written. I want to read more! I don't know that much about the Harry Potter books, but this is compelling stuff ...

Sorry I'd forgotten to log-in. That was me who wrote the review below.

Oh. My. God. You simply MUST continue this. Ugh. So delicious especially the details in which you wrote the lemons. H/Hr chemistry at its finest! *closes eyes in bliss* Thank you for the lovely read dear. Please please please continue it.

I like how you have let the characters evolve and change while keeping their personalities true to the original books.

That was bloody fantastic! one of the best fics i have read in such a long time. I love stories when harry and hermione are just getting together and this one was just so believable. I loved the way that everything didn't just fall into place after one kiss as it does in so many naive stories. brilliant this really made my night.

wah please update or at least tell me where your updating please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!please!