wow! astig yun ha! pinoy ka rin pala? hihi! super drama and angst... "you were like my brother" -- Hermione to Ron! nyahahaha! sana totoo yun!

pilipino ka rin? hehehe i shouldn't be surprised... marami palang pilipino na fan ng harry potter...

anyways... very angsty... and dramatic... i'm at a loss of words...and lupit...


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may i ask? are u spanish? or a filipino? just the word paalam made me curious...ciao!!!
-blessed be-

hey!
I just wanted to acknowledge the presence of a Filipino in portkey.org. Just like the others who had reviewed on your story, your title caught my eye and, well, i was curious on how you write. You were very good and you deserves more credit. Keep on writing and don't be afraid to broaden your imagination. Just remember that readers love a good mystery behind every story, love story or not. How come I know? Well, I also write fics and I'm working on one now. Unfortunately, it's not posted in this site because my kind of story is prohibited here. It's a cross-over generation kind. And if you want to check it out, feel free to do so. It's posted in fanfiction.net. My username is Gladz-27. The title's Twist Through Time. I'll be honored if you take time to read it. Anyway, I have to go it's already 11 pm and school would be waiting for me tomorrow. And by the way, if you do read it, please review and state your name and remind me who you are so I would know. Good luck with your future stories!

Love,
Gladz

I am really amaze at your ability to write like this as such a young age of 13. When I was 13 i wasnt really into short stories but into poetry but i was still wasnt as good as to compare to some thing like this. I guess is just a pinay thing. Anyway i read both story and again i was amaze to have found out your only 13. I liked how you manage to have put in you cultural background in with the story (my kaibigans all tell me that if i wasnt so brown and fluent in tagalog they would think i came from england for i know much more about england than the phil itself). So it was good and great Job on both story keep up the good work! It must be talent! Keep writing! !

dat's ahhh.. you two are pretty funny by the way! hehe! anyway just want to say, dat i'm glad that there's a Filipino out there writing in the portkey! you're title really catches my eye so i thought why not say something to these guys.. anyway again about the story... for me its pretty good actually.. but why kill hermione? bakit? bakit? at si Ron pa ang pumatay!.. wel juz kip up the good work!

ps, your other FF on this site is called "A Fallen Tear" not a Falling tear. If you want people to read the companion piece you should make sure to tell them the right title. But i did enjoy your fic.

ps, your other FF on this site is called "A Fallen Tear" not a Falling tear. If you want people to read the companion piece you should make sure to tell them the right title. But i did enjoy your fic.

Not to bad I only wish that it was alittle longer

Wow! This was really hard to read. You've answered some questions and left others. Very well done! Alorkin

Not the end, exactly, as you will tell us why the hell ron would do such a stupid thing and yet act so wise.

good job!

Not bad, there There are minor flaws in style but, hey you're thirteen. You have lots of time to improve. But as I say, not bad!

Hope to read more of your works, kabayan