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Five to One(sequel to duplicate)

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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 02/08/06
Finish this story dang it. It's really funny and I want to see what happens to harry
 

fx
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 29/01/06
I wish this story could be continued. It's just so damn funny!
 

GriffGirl08
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 08/11/05
This story is hott!!!!But in case you didnt notice it hasn't been updated since October 31 2oo4!!!!! Please I love this story and don't you dare just leave it at that..Please update as soon as you can( hopefully soon)
 

Riss528
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 02/10/05
This is absolutely HILARIOUS!! Its soooooo funny!! Keep it up
 

Kalina Malia
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 25/02/05
HAHA. This is just great. So when is Hermione gonna come home and love on Harry? lol. I hope you update soon!

~K.M.
 

harryherm84
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 19/11/04
This story is an absolute riot! I was laughing so hard reading duplicate, and this one is so great! great sense of humor! update soon!
 

~Emma_Granger~
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 09/11/04
LOL! I love it! It's SO funny! I think it's really exaggerated, but otherwise, it wouldn't be worth reading. I guess #1 got the most personality. She seems to be the most distinctive and to be the leader.
 

~Emma_Granger~
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 09/11/04
Oh, the hormones! I guess Hermione's having fun working out things, while actually making them worse. I wish her good luck with driving Harry crazy. By the way, I thought the Hermione in the hottub was the real one because she spoke first, but I did think her behaviour would be a bit odd for Hermione.
 

~Emma_Granger~
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/11/04
You can soo tell that that the last Hermione is the real one. I love that Harry brought home his date to such a mess. Also, Hermione orchestrated it all, because the clones don't seem to have minds of their own. I can't wait to see how Harry reacts.
 

uten
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 02/11/04
Heh.. These clones are funny. I still wish the rating was more than PG-13, but life is full of people not getting what they want.

I'm curious as to how the clones got into his room if he locked it, the shower was amusing, but there must be something wrong with Harry. These clones are supposed to be hormonally charged and basically want to shag Harry. If he has three naked girls rubbing themselves, while all wet and soapy, he's going to have a reaction, especially since the girls washed everywhere. Yet nothing happened. Doesn't make sense for the way you've set the story up. Sure, you're getting some laughs and the chapters are nice (I loved it when Ella got dunked in the paint and then slid along the floor into a fountain.. But, with the scenes you are doing, either they aren't as hormonally charged as you have made everyone make them out to be (which I doubt considering their purchases), or Harry needs Viagra. It just doesn't make sense unfortunately.
Author Feedback: first off thanks for the reviews. to answer you question Harry's supposed to be a gentleman and second i'm trying to keep it pg-13. Harry is trying to not betray hermiones trust. and he has reacted remember all the cold showers? that's how he tamps down his own hormones. he's tempted of course, but values mione's friendship to much to jeopordized by letting anything happen/
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 01/11/04
that is funny and cool and you really did a good job.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/11/04
why is there five hermiones can you help me out i like the but why is harry with ella he is sopoesed to be with hermione
 

RadcliffesPixie
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 01/11/04
That was a really great chapter, you have a gift with humor. I want to thank you for the fic and I'll be waiting for the next one.
 

Eternal_Magi
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 01/11/04
Like last chapter. This is really going to be interesting! Well, keep it up and don't try to have some mercy on Harry. I think he has suffered enough. But is he really suffering? NAAAHHHHH!!!
 

Eternal_Magi
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 01/11/04
This IS turning out to be quite the fiasco, huh? I have the oddest feeling, that the real Hermione is in that group of five. But that is pure speculation until we find out for real. Then again, I wouldn't be surprized. At the end of "Duplicate," Hermione was said to have a mischievious look on her, and that could mean a few things. Well none the less. This really turngin out to be quite the riot. Gee, I wonder what happens next? 0_o
 

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