er... that was kinda..... er.... anticlimatic...do a sequel... but good....  |
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oh my God...You do not know what your story did to me.Do you know the feeling when you are crying like your life depended on it?Bloody hell,that was soooooo sad.I kind of didn't like it because Harry died.I think I would die if it was true...But you did an excelent work.Congratulations!!! *waves with red,puffy bloodshot-eyes* buhbye! |
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aaw! it was soo sad!but good!sad and short but good! ggod job!i needed a short H/Hr fanfic all ive been reading have atleast 10 chapters anyways!thnx!great job!!! |
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This is so sad. I love that song and it fits very well with this story. Hermione can't let go of Harry yet, as much as she tries. Now, I'm wondering how he survived. I'm sure it will all be explained in time. Until then, I'm happy to try and come up with my own ideas.  Anyway, keep on writing! |
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Very well written, if sad. The hurt is always so much greater when one doesn't get a chance to say goodbye. |
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quizgirlSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 18/02/05
This was depressing, and that's that. I'm glad you're not Rowling! You write well though. 
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bmv777Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 18/02/05
Wow.  . Perhaps the best angst I have red. Although i have only read 3 angst all by you. Although i might of liked the body better I really cant tell. Its really sad how she yelled at him even though he might not come back. Have you ever written anything beside angst? I think you would be really good at romance as well. Or mabye even a romance/angst or angst/romance you are my second favourite author |
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bmv777Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/02/05
This truely is yoru best. It is a very sad mood and reading this after imaginary by hermoines twin and The body by you I really think hermoine is like Luna. When you make a writer feel like this you know your doing very well. And you didn't have any typos. You only had a few punctuation errors. I acctualy cried during this because of the mindset and how in the end she thought she saw Harry in her world. That is the part I think i began to cry at .
I give it a 5 out of 5 due to some other things I have read that also make this make my mind feel your writeing. |
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I really like your story, it rocks. I can feel the emotion and pain in it. Great Job1 |
Author Feedback: Thanks so much - that means I'm doing my job. I actually cried while writing this. I'm really glad you like it. Thanks for your review!
<3 Michelle <3 |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/01/05
Oh wow.I am actually crying right now.It took me a moment to recognize "My Immortal" but when I did the tears came.Could you do me a huge favor? Please write a story telling about the thoughts of Lily Evans-Potter right after her husband, James,was murdered by Voldemort.She died just minutes after,but I think that,with your wonderfully perfect writing style,you can pull off a touching,sorrowfull one-shot.Thank you for writing this.
Sincerely,
Your Biggest Fan |
Author Feedback: Wow - thank you so much! 'My Immortal' was such a sad song to me because I thought it was about someone passing away - let me tell you - the music video was a HUGE let down. It took awhile to get that out of my head. Then I wrote this Anyway - about that fanfiction. I think I might. I really, really might. And I'll let you know the second I finish it. I don't really ever get requests for fanfics, but it's nice. Anyway, thank you so much and I'm glad you like it. I'll try to find time to write that for you.
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 28/12/04
I think it's good. I reconized this -
“Where is he? I don't understand. His body is there and I just don't understand why he can't just get back in.” Hermione said absently to Ron as she looked up into the sky. - It sounds a lot like what Anya said in The Body ( Buffy The Vampire Slayer season 5) |
Author Feedback: Wow - that was weird - I opened this review up and an add for Buffy season 7 came up on my screen. That was weird... Anyway - that's exactly where that came from. I don't know - she really had a point... Anyway - oh, since I know you know Buffy I'm going to share this with you. I was watching season 7 last night and it was when Willow was in England with Giles trying to control her magic. Anyway she said:
"I thought, when you brought me over here, that you were going to kill me...Or at least lock me in some magical prison with the torture... But then you go all Dumbledore on me...teaching me about magic..." ~Willow, Buffy, season 7
Well, it's very sad that I remembered that entire quote without looking it up... There was also a reference when Willow saio she wrote fanfiction - that's just cool. Anyway, this has dragged on quite a bit. Thanks again.
<3 Michelle <3 |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/12/04
wow. this is so cool... I love that song as well! its the best |
Author Feedback: I'm glad you liked it. The song ("My Immortal") seemed to fit Harry and Hermione so well that I had to write about it. But I didn't want to make a song fic because those drive me crazy. I had to put the song actually in the story - and I think it turend out okay Anyway, thanks again.
<3 Michelle <3 |
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Lol, I'm like crying again . No worries though, I still think it was great! |
Author Feedback: You're supposed to be crying I'm glad you like it
<3 Michelle <3 |
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OMG! First off, I love Evanescence! And second, I almost had a breakdown... Just the though of Harry, Ron, or Hermione dying brings tears to my eyes . It's like there actually my friends, and... Do you know what I mean? I don't want you to think I'm crazy or anything (which I vary well might be) But I'm a 13 year old girl who is totally OBSESSED  with Harry Potter, as are many other people in this world... But anyway, when I read the last paragraph it really put me in suspense, so I'm going to stop reviewing now, and read chapter 2! |
Author Feedback: Wow - thanks. I love Evanescence too. I always thought this song was perfect for Harry and Hermione  . And I exactly the same way. It's really like they are my friends. That's why I can't read the books at school. I say things like they can hear me and I 'll cry and get mad...at the book. Which is just scary in itself. I'm not crazy though, I swear. Same, same. I hope you like chapter two Thanks again!
<3 Michelle <3 |
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Wow. Of course I'm going to say it's sad, but it's angst writing, right?! Very well written, loved the ending. Keep up the awesome work! |
Author Feedback: Thanks. I actually cried when I wrote this - but let's not talk about that *blushes* Anyway - yeah, it's kind of angst writing. Anyway - thanks again
<3 Michelle <3 |
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