AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/11/08
 I enjoyed this start it was different and I am looking forward to Harry standing up for himself. |
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jackaninySigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/11/08
God! I wanted Ron and Harry to kick Percy's ass so bad!
Really good stuff. A bit of sap, good amount of humor and just a dash of stickin' it to the man.
Got the characters down pretty well too.
Definitely looking forward to reading more of your stuff. |
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This is really old, but I'm still going to review. I thought this was brilliant. Basically, thank you so much for writing this. I loved it.
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Jeez.
I don't think I've ever commented an author this much. This is story is just.. wow. I don't even know how else to put it. The stupidity of the ministry, the fear that someone might actually be better than the boundaries they've set up for themselves, the power and love Hermione has in the school, the solidarity and loyalty of the students, the pride of the teachers, the nastiness of one Percy Weasley, and the Harry/Hermione love that we all know.
Wow.
-mel |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/02/08
This was depressing.
I absolutely hate stories where Harry lets people walk all over him and his friends. |
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djoSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/02/08
Do you know how embarrassing it is to sit in the office with tears in your eyes when you are actually supposed to do your work ???
Great story! WOW! |
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Take one(1) pompous git of a Weasley, and one(1) self-serving, cowardly, amoral and completely useless Minister of Magic, and place them in a magically enlarged blender.
Hit 'puree'.
Cornholius should be more careful; after all, he's counting on the Chosen One to save his porcine ass from Moldyfarts. Under those terms pissing Harry off by attacking the girl he loves would seem to be counter-productive, no matter how much of a certified pain-in-the-arse she's choosing to be.... |
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CateagleSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/02/08
I'm coming to this one rather late, but I have to say that I really enjoyed this well-written and poignant one-shot. I admit I'd like to see follow-on stories detailing what happens in the aftermath (a victorious Harry is rather likely, now, to make life *HELL* for this Minister of Magic and the sodding idiot won't be able to do a thing - and what'll likely happen to Percy, even if it's non-violent, will be even worse). I can see Hermione finding a way to take her NEWTS, anyway, and still getting top scores all around (much to the Minister's disgruntlement). Add to the developing relationship here 'tween Harry & Hermione and there's lots more to be told here. |
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Oh my gosh, you had the emotional freak (aka me) crying again! well, not full on crying, just tears in my eyes. brilliantly done. great. kay so i read through all of your stories and there is not ONE that i didnt enjoy! thank you for writing these many brilliant lovely fics and i hope you continue to write more! Muuch muuch loove! |
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mg2090Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/05/07
hehe....nice. i like it ALOT! certainly something no one has ever done before! keep up the good work!
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Ow. Dammit that actually made me cry. T_T *glomps you* Thanks so much for writing this. All the stories you've written so far keep carving themselves in my heart. *smiles* It wonderful darling. Please don't ever stop writing. I'll always be a fan of yours. |
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bockpackSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/07/06
Such a strong, inspiring story. I could see and hear everything in the Great Hall, just as you described it. And the letter from Harry was one of the best dialogues/monologues I've ever read. I could hear Harry, too, and see Hermione as she read his words.
Well done. |
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CokieismeSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/07/06
Just wanted to be able to add this to my favorites list. It really is good. |
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i love this story - that hermione sacrifices hogwarts for the other students, and that harry finally tells her. Wish ron would have punched percy though! |
Author Feedback: Yeah, well...it's more noble and less chaotic this way, although I do see your point about Percy.
I always felt this would make a great movie scene. That's how it started out in my head. Scary, I know.  Couldn't you just picture it, though? In fact, my friend Demosthenes actually drew a picture of the kiss...the whole scene, really. I think it's in the Fan Art section, if you want to check it out. It's beautiful.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. It is much appreciated. |
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eydrythUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/04/06
I came late into the fanfic reading stage. So, it's only now that I discovered this.
It's sad, but I love it.  It brings home the point of why H/Hr makes sense. Lovely work. I shall be reading your other fics. Thanks for sharing these! |
Author Feedback: Better late than never...although I've been out of it, really, since HBP.
Still, thank you for reading the story (and all the others you read). I'm glad you think it portrays the characters in a way that makes sense. Obviously, it's how I see them. And it's how I love them.
Thanks for the feedback! |
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