Part of this Chapter (16) is missing please relaod it so we can figure out what happend at the match.

Did you get this idea from the season finale of Lizzie McGuire, because that's almost exactly what happened... Anyway, nice story and I cant wait to read more.

this is a great story i liked it very you are a great i will now read the sequel then review that

this is a very good chapter i liked it very much i will read next six chapters later and then i wiil review this is a great story you are great writer

Great story But harry... I can't understand why he would ever be so rude against hermione And we still don't know who the person is harry looks like as prof. Raptor said

hey
that was a great fanfic! it was really addictive!
The epilouge got me a bit confused, but ill read Quaffles, Anyone?2 and see if it helps
keep up the great work
michellex

this was a good story even if Harry and Hermione were a bit out of character and I didn't understand the last chapter. could you tell us what songs are the lyrics from?
Thanks

Omg. I just finished reading this story. Great except for a few grammatical errors. the angst was killing me, but I loved it and I am going to start the sequel. This epilogue was confusing but I am sure questions will be answered. Well done.

yey.. the end..? didn't get the last part...
but it was sweet...
i see there's a part 2.. goody!! will read SOON!!!

yey! that was what I was hoping he'd do all the time!!
Exept, I didn't quite get that moving thingy... When did she say that? Chapter 16 was abit wierd at the end.. Maybe it were supposed to be there?
ANYHO.. Really cute, and great that it has a story behind it to...!

Love from Nurlaithiel, on a computer at school, and who right now is to lazy to log on.. (And can't remember her password... )

heehehe.. I like it! It's not just H/Hr but a story too! More like how JKR would have wrote it...!
BUT of course, it was sweet with that little hinting in the end there...

I liked the plot but both Harry and Hermione seemed a bit out of character. I know Harry has the tendency to explode at his friends but don't think he would call Hermione a mudblood and say he wished he had left her with the troll. I also don't think that Hermione would put so much emphasis on her appearance. also the spelling and grammer could use a little work. But overall this story was a excellent one.

Good story! There was a bit of chapter 16 missing I think as the beginning of chapter 17 didn't make any sense at all! I liked the story, but the epilogue was a bit confusing. Nice job.

Well this looks like it is going to be really intersting, unfortunatley for me I don't have time to continue reading, but I am going to be spending my night reading this story I think...well keep up the good work because this looks like it is going to be awesome!

the chapter doesn't seem to be showing fully. please reload? its a good story, if slightly angsty for my liking...