eydrythUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/04/06
Everytime I read this I can't help but laugh! I love your ending. The Princess Bride is one of my favorite movies.  |
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HAHASHAHA this is definitely a very funny story. keep writing..i like it! ^_^ |
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That was very funny at the end and I loved the Princess Bride reference! 
Surprised and glad that it was Hermione, not Harry who chased her down and then only Stunned her and all of it with a baby on her back. Such a fitting end to Bellatrix. Killed by the "mudblood". |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/02/05
wow! you are really the first fanfic author to include princess bride lines. I think its really funny to do this |
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anneu53714Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/02/05
Bob, this is as good as it was the first time I read it, on your LJ. The first half is so wonderfully angsty - then you move seamlessly into the somewhat fluffy recap and conclusion. The line from THE PRINCESS BRIDE is one of the best punchlines of all! *hugs*  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/01/05
Hey MW, LS here. Interesting fic. Thought it would have been Neville getting Bellatrix. Nice to see the tables turned on her and getting her justice in the end.
--ls |
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Very choice! I read this after you posted the link on Kinsfire's message board, don't know how I missed it the first time around. And I loved that she had her child in the carrier; talk about cutting Bellatrix's ego down to size, not even scary enough for Hermione to use a sitter? Great job! |
Author Feedback: Thanks, fenris! Yeah, I kinda cut Bella down to size here. As Hermione said, she did look rather pathetic.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!  |
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I dont know why I felt sad reading this story. Was it supposed to do that?? I was hoping for a bit of comedy... all in all, great writing. |
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jchaserSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/10/04
Cute story. Really enjoyable one shot. Definitely will have to try some of your other stories. |
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hammergalSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/10/04
OMG, I just had to smile at that! So many stories focus on the angst of it all...I can just picture Bellatrix's face! Good one! |
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hahaha! That was soooo good! Thanks for sharing that magnificant piece of work. No rhymes though, and that a good thing....heheh. Gotta respect the giant. |
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LOL!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THAT LINE from The Princess Bride!!! one of my teammates always makes me say it....lol! great job |
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AmdornSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/10/04
Yeah!
Go Princess Bride quotes. Gotta love the ending.
I was really worried when I first started reading that it was Hermione that was running.
It was an interesting twist to have it from Bellatrix's point of view. |
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misskittySigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/10/04
AH! I can't believe you managed to get in a quote (of sorts) of The Princess Bride. That is one of my favorite movies of all time (right up there with all the HP flicks, of course.) But I must know, did Hermione just happen to see Bellatrix or was she actively chasing her? |
Author Feedback: Well, I'd like to say that she's always been looking for Bella, trying to keep any eye out for her, but this was totaly by circumstance. I wrote in there that Bella believed she had been careless (which she was) and the (hopefully) subtle clue that Hermione had spotted her in the trash bin behind the grocers and she's putting away the groceries at the end ...
Glad you liked it and thanks for reviewing! |
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