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One Kiss

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mynameisnaruto
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/10/06
I like it! its really really good! haha ron's gonna kill harry sooner or later!!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/10/06
i really liked that especially the first kiss and rons outburst.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/03/06
I LOVED IT!
i really did.
and I almost laughed at the
"sexual outtings"
ahh wonderful.
 

hp-n-hg
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/03/06
i absolutely love it its sweet oh i just can't put it into words again i say i love it
 

bellachaos
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/02/06
Very nice story. I really liked that you managed to keep everyone in character and still have Harry and Hermione end up together. Great job!
 

Croix
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/01/06


Yeah, I pretty much love you. This was awesome. Yahoo. (:
 

Chelime
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/01/05
I had to read your other stories after reading "Could I have a vord?"
You write such sweet little ficlets - they have just enough passion and fluff and humor and drama in them to make up for the fact that they're only a chapter long. There are very few authors who can actually pull off a good one-shot - there's usually gaping holes left in them, or they are much too long to actually qualify as a "one-shot." You write them beautifully.
I am going to read your other ficlet now, and I hope to see more fics from you soon!
 

Harrysgrl
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/11/04
That could have been a nice NICE NC17 fic.... think of the possabilities... LOL! but this was really great. you did wonderful!
 

harryherm84
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/11/04
Good one-shot. You really captured the emotions well. I liked the ending also! Good job!
 

missaznwonder
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/11/04
Hermione's random outburst is a bit out of character, but not well-fitting in this situation. A little harsh on poor Ron, though.

I adore your last paragraph, very nice. I like the whole Rita situation as well, awesome.
 

drama963
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/10/04
I hope you please write a sequel. Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 

~Emma_Granger~
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/10/04
This is great. The characters are realistic, the plot makes sense, and I guess Rita just couldn't resist aggravating Hermione. I can't wait for the next chapter.
 

swimchick1614
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/10/04
oh that was so sweet, very nicely written with "the triangle" in there i loved it!
 

MichelleRadcliffe
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/10/04
That was awesome! Awesome beginning awesome plot awesome awesome ending. There weren't any errors that I saw (although I wasn't really looking) but it looked pretty good to me. I think you could do a sequel but you ended this so well that I almost want you to leave it as it is...almost If you decide to continue it I have you on my author alerts so I'll read and review right away. Happy writing
Author Feedback: Thanks very much! I have a few ideas running around for a sequel to this, but I'm still debating on whether or not to just leave this one as it is.
 

spaz141
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/10/04
cute, I didn't notice any grammar problems, but then I wasn't looking for them. So nothing stood out. Nice little piece, thanks.
Author Feedback: Good good; I was hoping there wouldn't be too many (or any) grammar mistakes. Thanks for reviewing!
 

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