haha! even with the letter stolen - the connection between harry and hermione wins out and she still gets the message. i hope the creepy man in the cave doesn't do anything weird to Hedwig. The secrets of Leakwood manor, eh? I'm intrigued...

'my sister's bed'? and who's the friend? I like Teebel much better than Dobby... is the friend going to be the mad scientist? or is harry? hmm...

yay for harry having a home! i'm so thrilled that he has a place of his own that is connected to lilly and can provide him a place of sanctuary. i'm very much so enjoying this story - so onwards i click to the next chapter!

What? That's the end. I'm going to your profile page, there better be a sequal sitting out there. A very cool story you have here, and nicely written. Thanks for sharing!

Wow! This is a great fic! Do you plan on writing a second part to this? I noticed that you haven't posted anything for a while... hopefully you'll continue to write and post on portkey. I look forward to reading your work, you're very talented Once again, great job writing this fic!

lalalala i love it! its one of the better stories that ive read in a while, im excited

great story so far, I had a friend recomend it and I will say I haven't been let down. hope you plan to contenue what you have started with this little serial.
Chinthliss

this was very good...and a very interesting twist in the end. so thats how the "muggles" could be cured...by giving them magic. very clever i must say. good job! xoxo
Nikki

this is a very good story. somewhat creepy but very good. ive noticed you have made some spelling and grammar errors...using the wrods words...not adding prefixes...etc...but nothing major. good job though. i will try and read more later. xoxo
nikki

Lol, that was great. I cannot wait until you have the rest of the Harry Potter Mysteries up. Those will be great to read. I knew the lights did something, but I didn't know what. So it made Colette a witch! That's amazing. This story was awesome, I loved how everything fell into place in the end, but then there's that one piece of the puzzle that doesn't exactly fit right, Griltskin.

DUMBELDORE? Whoa! Didn't expectt that. I thought he was getting letters from the dead or something. I felt bad for Harry when he had to destroy the machine, so much history and he actually felt an connection with family, and when it didn't work and when he got the letter, he had to destory it. Each spell to destory it was causing him almost physical pain. I thought that was great and powerful and when she saw the lights in her eyes, I actually thought some of the machine was working. Or was that wrong?

Ah, the diamond! And the Teebel bit where he was in the cave and he couldn't get out, I really liked that. I cannot wait until I read the next two chapters, I haven't read those yet.

The small quarrel between Harry and Hermione I thought was perfect. Because Hermione knew what she was doing, knew what was going to happen, but Harry still tried to protect her from it anyway. The last paragraph was the funniest one because, it just made me laugh. The Teebel bit was very... intresting. Are Harry and Hermione ever going to get to the letter?

Lol, loved the kissing scene between Harry and Hermione, i thought it was very cute. Also, how Ginny and Neville got lost on the beach, I thought it was very Neville of them to wind up lost like that. And then the fog I was thinking about when I read that a short story I read by Stephen King called "The Mist." Except, that mist killed people, not made them sleeply and lost. And the beginning with how the letter wasn't just a normal, letter, I was laughing.

I was laughing when you made Harry in a different place so Amelia and Hermione could talk, and that Amelia was giggling so hard Harry was having trouble putting the pieces together. I thought it was cute when Amelia was thinking at least they weren't kissing, that would be gross. It made me feel like a little kid again. I like the game between Ginny and Neville also, I thought it was just really sweet. Also that Colette and Billi are starting to find some things out.