ohhhhhhhhhhhh what a night!!!! really truly u have trully escide my expectacion really good job

that was a really really really good story! it's in my favorites

This was a wonderful PWP. I totally loved it. Great job.

Oh, and i forgot to mention that i found Hermione's dialogues with herself hilarious. Randy Hermione... Ha ha, very funny. Poor thing... But she got what she wanted and that's the point.

Amazing piece of smut/fluff. Loved it. You have talent for writing hot sexy scenes! Congratulations!

Woooooooow! That was a great story thanx for the detail lots of other people just say 'oh yeah then they did it!' but I get annoyed at that 'coz I want detail so I love this story

Oh my God...how hot was that! I knew you could do it and it was even better than I expected. Fantastic, I feel as limp as Harry and Hermione. Wow!
hammergal

Great this is more NC-17! Great Job! Im glad you added this part onto the story! Yeah go H/Hr! H/Hr forever! !

The story wasn't bad, but it was just too...horny! It felt really rushed and a bit unnatural. Your writing is good, but the character/story development may need some work. Cheers!

Holy Crap, that was freakin amazing. I think I need to go take a nice long cold cold cold shower. Great descriptive writing..... **off to take that shower**

ah, yes! Us h/hr shippers can now move on after this finish! thanks a bunch!!
please, feel free to write another one-shot?!
good work!
~~gothicevilfairy~~

I really liked this fic, I really did. Actually, you know what? I LOVED this fic! It had all of the perfect qualities I look for in a fic and I want to thank you for a job well done. Laterz!

That was good, but why didnt you just post it as a second chapter? I really wish they would have just done it in the shower instead of taking the time to dry off and get back into bed.

heheh, the prologue was really really good. I love when Hermione is speak dirty, when she swearing. It's funnny as hell ;D Make me laugh in front of my screen if you wanna know.
All in all, a really good "one shot" fic, I've had a nice time reading it. Keep going ^^

Great epilogue...very intense Thanks so much for adding it to the story though still wish there was more. Guess I'll just go read your other stories.