Another amazing piece. I love your stuff

That's beautiful. Usually romance between them is either fluff or angst. That was just love. Just purity. Good job.

haha

romantic

I have been left awed and revelling once again in the power of Harry/Hermione.



*gape* And thanks for dedicating it to me! *blush*



There were a few very tiny mistakes, like a few missing commas and 'off' instead of 'of', but the writing was wonderfully poetic and lyrical. I loved the way you wrote in Harry's actions with his thoughts and Hermione's eventual addition to the story. I do like the "Omniscient Author" device you employed - it gives us a feel of the story - it is as though we are truly sitting somewhere in the Quidditch stands, watching from a place where we can see everything.



(And providing some hope that perhaps we'll really be in control of the plot!)



I really enjoyed this story! It's a perfect little bit of fluff on a monotonous day (combined with bad results for Social Studies)...



Thanks for writing something this lovely! (Chews on fluff)



Cheers,

Dauphin

*sniff* In need of serious Kleenex over here!!!



Great...so great...so brilliant...*sniff*