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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 10 | Date : 05/07/05
oh this story is so sad. i cant believe ginny diedd! i couldn't believe it. update soon please.
 

sailor_girl
Signed | Chapter : 10 | Date : 29/03/05
This chapter was very good with all the emotion but I don't think Fleurdelis is 'broken' because someone who has gone through everything she has would only be stronger because of it
just an opinion
~sloan
 

laila
Signed | Chapter : 10 | Date : 22/03/05
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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 10 | Date : 22/03/05
oh my god... that was absolutely beautiful. it was so touching. i'm still crying. its so sad. you did an amazing job with this fic. seems like someting that would actually happen. i love it. i hope you'll do a sequel? please!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/03/05
will american fanfic writers please stop using americanisms in harry potter fanfic. you all know hp and all the characters are mostly english so stop saying mom and say mum, no dudes or awesomes etc etc. the stories can be really good but ruined by americanisms. its nothing against americans but the characters would not talk that way. for refernce on how they talk and colloqialisms etc just read jk's books.
 

lukkiseven
Signed | Chapter : 10 | Date : 22/03/05
HOW COULD YOU KILL HER! I am so MAD at you! I am boycotting this story! SO THERE!
 

HPFAN1
Signed | Chapter : 10 | Date : 22/03/05
I still cant believe Ginny died. I hope things get better with Draco and Fleurdelis.
 

down2earthangl85
Signed | Chapter : 10 | Date : 22/03/05
omg i am crying right now like big ol tears are falling wow that was powerful he wrote her everyday wow im so sad right now i need tissue... good story
 

Unsigned | Chapter : 10 | Date : 22/03/05
wow...that was depressing...it was confusing too...but hmm..nice story if i wasn't looking for a happy ending
 

Lady Starlight
Signed | Chapter : 10 | Date : 22/03/05
Nice ending, acknowledging the deep-seated pain and lack of relationship. His apology was necessary and should help the healing begin.

I really liked that she was in Ravenclaw, a new beginning. It probably also helped them a lot that she was away at boarding school for most of the year... gave him more time to get used to her.

Look forward to more of your writing.
 

laila
Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 15/03/05
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MrsDanielRadcliffe
Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 14/03/05
That's so sad. I didn't expect that at all. I'm off to read the next chapter.
 

MrsDanielRadcliffe
Signed | Chapter : 6 | Date : 14/03/05
Is Ginny just taking Draco's last name? In the last chapter Draco refers to himself as Ginny's fiance and in this chapter she has a married name. Also, (and I could be wrong in saying this) you spell their daughter's name differently in this chapter than in other chapters. If I'm wrong in saying that, please excuse that part of the comment. Otherwise, good shot!
 

MrsDanielRadcliffe
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 14/03/05
I've gotten letters like this. They are truly heartbreaking. Good shot.
 

ginnymalfoy21
Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 09/03/05
Oh Ginny died! Oh Malfoy why didnt you just go back you dumb fool! Now Ginny's dead! ! What's he going to do now!
 

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