you can't leave us hanging like that! that's so wrong! please add more!

thats all! cmon and hurry write the next chapter! i cant eait to read it! hurry up wont u! plzzz kk bye bye!

Wait! NO! how can you just end it? come on! please please at least put ONE other chapter, you cant do this, it is just...wrong! lol please put another chapter up!

dude...there's something called resolution ....don't be afraid to add one in though...but hurry soon .

what??? that is it?? the end? what on earth? that's it????????????

That was a very nice chapter even though I've never been a fan of cliff-hangers!!! VERY NICE!!!

Nice Job!!! I really like it and can't wait for further chapters keep it up man!!!

Splishy Splash

Wow. That was mean i really hope you write more that's just a mean cliffhanger. i like the story. so...are you writing more?

Aphroditee

Nope definately not the end. Or atleast I hope it's not or I'll kill you with my bare hands! Come on you have to write the next part.

Well, the angst was good. The interaction between Ron and Harry was good. The direction you took Harry's thoughts was nicely written.

My only problem was the end. The website shows that this piece of fiction is complete. It doesn't seem complete from your last line.

For me you had all this build up and then it ended very anti-climatically.

OOh that's harsh. This would have been good as a one shot but noooooooooo you just had to leave me hanging

You have to continue.
Leaving readers there, is rather upsetting.
Everyone wants to know more.
Hope you consider writing chapter 2, and try to make it longer.

lol i like it you should write a longer story with that in it it would be good you could end up with something like the final battle you would have to make it really good though i want to become a write for portkey and ive got tones of really good ideas i just dont know how to put them into words keep writing

Very interesting start, can't wait to see where you take it. Don't make me wait too long!

very good story, yet you left us hanging! it's very cute, though, and works this way, too. personally, i'd love for you to continue.. i love your sense of detail and harry's atrraction to hermione.. so sweet! how could you not like him back? hehe... if you do chose to continue this, i'll be sure to read it!