hey great story so far. i cant wait to read the rest of this story.

This is a really amazing story. it would just help a little if you split it into paragraphs. but its a brilliant story, hurry up with the next chap.

I realy like this story and i cant wait 2 read the rest of it! i hope u keep on updating it!

Are you going to finish this story sometime? Because I really think this is a good story and I want to find out what happens.

Why don`t you finish the storie up! Because this isn`t nice, don`t make half the work of it.

CLIFFIE!!
WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE!!!!
I WILL BE SO MAD IF YOU DON'T WRITE!!!!!!!!!!!!

OH COME ON THIS IS THE BEST BLOODY STORY BY FAR AND YOU HAVENT UPDATED IN ABOUT A YEAR!!!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!! FOR THE SAKE OF THE PEOPLE WHO LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!

it was good but i dont think that hermione and whatever his name is are good for eachother

I really really like this story, are you ever going to continue it? I guess not because it has been since March since you last updated, that's a shame!

nice fic plz...continue very soon

ooh...update soon! are they in 7th year?

Pretty good, but i don't think Seamus would really hurt Hermione. I don't think he's like that. But i wanna know what happens next

this was a great story. it was the best i read for a century.

please update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hey, this is a good start... just one thing... maybe try to make your sentences a little more distinct and not run together as much. It's a really good story so far, it just might make it a little easier to read. Keep up the good work!