papermaskSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/03/08
Lovely story, and very unique idea. I just adore Harry/Hermione. Fantastic work.  |
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oi, like it! well, in fact i think it was cool, they getting pissed... and i bet that hermione would look the magazine!!! |
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ahaha that was amazing. but it still doesn't explain why hermione bearly gave him hugs anymore. maybe yu should describe that? or no if yu don't wanna. |
Author Feedback: Thank you. Well, this story was from Harry's point of view. I suppose Hermione could have said something about that, but she didn't. In my mind she wasn't doing that more because she was still sore from being injured so badly in the Department of Mysteries. THanks for reviewing |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/05/06
  wow this story is totaly cool. i love reading this story |
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Hey thanks for the reply. I'll definitely wait for that one. Though I hope that I follows right after HBP and they are both still have their inocnence like in this fic. I've noticed that you mostly write H/Hr getting together after Hogwarts when they had their share of relationships so I hope that if you decide to write the story it would have none of that. Really enjoyed the angst/humor combination of this so I hope to see that too. |
Author Feedback: Thanks for reviewing. I don't think I'll ever get around to writing any follow-ups to this, but who knows. I've kind of lost my fanfiction muse and I'm mostly doing HP role-playing games now. Thanks again. |
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Great first kiss story. Ever thought of writing a sequel for this. Maybe something NC-17 about H/Hr doing things they read about in the magazine starting slowly then leading up to you know.  I can still feel the sting of HBP and a sequel to this where it did not happen might be the cure. |
Author Feedback: Thanks very much Actually I hadn't considered doing a sequel. HPB kind of messed up any plans I might have had for one.  But hey, I might write a different, post-HBP first kiss fic someday that could go a long way beyond kissing  Thanks again. |
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Awwww. This was a sweet little ditty which I could totally see happening in the book. Great job. |
Author Feedback: Why, thank you I was sort of hoping something like this would happen in HBP. Alas, no. But I'm glad I wrote this; it's what I wish would have happened. Thank goodness for fanfiction  |
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Hello, I just read your story after seeing a picture that was inspired by this story in the gallery. I loved how you wrote this. I am usually a harsh critic and from me that is the highest of high praise. I like that you were able to keep all of the characters in-line with their real personalities, and I'm glad that Ron got the blow-off, well what I consider blow-off. I like that you were able to stay true to Harry’s personality, and I like that you were able to resolve it all without a big row between the group. I hope that you will write more stories soon, and I hope that I enjoy them half as much as I did this one. Till next time, may your Muse visit often.
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Author Feedback: Thanks very much. I'm glad you liked it. This was a tough story to write, and I didn't like it until the third draft. I had planned to write maybe 3 more stories in this series, from different points of view, but I'm not sure if I'll do that now (depends on what happens in HBP, I guess...). Portkey is my home base for HP fan fic, so I'm sure you'll see more of my stories here. Thanks again for reviewing. |
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ThePickleSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/03/05
OMG This is by far, in my top ten of fave Harry/Hermione Fan Fics. Thanks so much for the well written, humorous read. |
Author Feedback: Wow, thanks very much. I hope to write a few more related stories but I just haven't got around to them yet. I'm not good at writing multiple stories at the same time, so I guess I'll need to wait until I have a lull in my work-in-progress (which is nothing like this). Thanks again. |
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DayDreamerUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/02/05
That was aweseome! I saw that picture of yours too of this story! I just loved it! I love this story! |
Author Feedback: Actually that drawing was done by the wonderful esicardi, based on my story. Isn't she fabulously talented? I'm glad you enjoyed this story; eventually I hope to write 2-3 more stories related to this, which will appear as "chapters" of Bittersweet Sixteen, but they won't necessarily be from Harry's point of view. Thanks again. |
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penelope78Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/01/05
Oh, I adore this story to pieces. This was wonderful and brilliant. You have such a great way of wording your descriptions, and I'm amazed. Loved it! |
Author Feedback: Better late than never- thanks much, Jennifer. I always worry that I'm not describing things well, since I have to work harder on that than on dialog. One of these days I'll write another story in this series. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/12/04
WOW!!! I really really like it so far! I'm definitely going to keep reading! |
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PepperoniSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/12/04
It is really a very refreshing story. Nicely written and with a good amout of humur in it. I am looking forward reading mor eof your stories.
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Author Feedback: Thanks very much! I hope to write 2-3 more stories in this series but I've been working on a longish WIP and haven't had time to really think about how I want to tackle them, though I know they won't all be from Harry's point of view. Thanks again. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/12/04
Cool!  I really like this. It is pretty original too! Keep it up. |
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VicklesSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/12/04
Very sweet and very well written! I really enjoyed it. I especially love where it basically comes to him in the form of "Bloody hell."
Great job! |
Author Feedback: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I hope to write 2-3 more stories in this series, but probably not until after Christmas. Thanks again. |
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