aww that was adorable! i love ur writing style...ur really good! it would've been great if u had continued, but its really cute that u left it here! plz keep up the great work!

awwwwww! now that's a great piece of fluffy pumpkin pie art! absolutly brilliant!

*tear, tear...cry cry*I'm not a very emotional person, well yes I am but I keep it to myself, but this, this story. Something in it just struck a sense. I don't know It was Perfect. It was sweet and not to smutty and it didn't overdo they're emotions,such as 'he's handsome, No! What Am I thinking this is harry!' people don't really think like that. And the way they talked and all the little touches they gave each other, it was just like the way I pictured them. As I read this story, there was something about it. I cried openly for about and hour. I loved it. I have read better stories, but yours held the perfect emotins.

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Awwww I love all this fluffyness U totally rock at these stories

hehe thatys so cute! its got a perfect amount of fluff so its not to sappy!

Very sweet little story, have you concerned writing a few more chapters, and developing the relationship you have obviously started.

awww this is soooo sweet...you should really add on to this one i can only imagine all the drama they would go threw though it's cute the way it is it'd be cool to read more of it...going on and on about how Hermione reads more fairytales to Harry...well anyways like i said it's a good story.

Aphroditee

ps. what else have you written? if the others are as good as this one than i can't wait to read them.

awww this is soooo sweet...you should really add on to this one i can only imagine all the drama they would go threw though it's cute the way it is it'd be cool to read more of it...going on and on about how Hermione reads more fairytales to Harry...well anyways like i said it's a good story.

Aphroditee

ps. what else have you written? if the others are as good as this one than i can't wait to read them.

Ahhh that was so cuteeee. I've pictured the whole scene in my head! And I love it! I'm looking forward to read other fictions of yours!

Luv
Nad

ahhhhhhhhhhhhh so cute ahhhhhhhhhhhh its so cute she reading 4 her and ahhh playing with his hair so cute so but so cute i cant think of anything eles to say

Good story. I liked a lot, but found a little short for my taste. Yes, it is a one-shot, but I felt that there could have been more. You should try writing a companion stroy to this, where Hermione heard Harry, but didn't respond due to the shock. Then the next day, Hermione starts acting strange around Harry because of what he said. Harry, being the blind git that he is, doesn't even remember himself saying it. Sorry, I write that into a story, but I am a horrible writer. So maybe you can apply my idea. Once again, sorry for wasting your time, but anyways. Good job on the this story all around, and I hope to read more of your works soon.

That was a really, really cute story. You should write a sequel!

Adorable! I wish it was longer. I look forward to reading other fictions from you. Thanks!

Aww!! I really liked the idea of this story. Very cute and simple!