sannihunSigned | Chapter : 10 | Date : 11/04/05
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sannihunSigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 11/04/05
Oooh! You really threw me on a loop with this one! (Can you say so? Threw me on a loop.... I'm Swedish so my English isn't the best...)
Anyway... I thought it was Wormtail, silly me! That would have been a bit too obvious maybe... Hmm... Chapter 10, here I come!
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sannihunSigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 11/04/05
Hi! I'm back again! *lol* another night and new homework to ignore! 
I feel so sorry for Ron! But honestly, we all knew it wuld be down to Harry and Mr. Evil in the end.
Like the way you did the "I Love Her!!" scene, very nice. Could see it clearly!!
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sannihunSigned | Chapter : 7 | Date : 10/04/05
This was so sad! And you had me worried for a while, that it might have been Ginny, but I don't think so... It's that stupid Kardinal guy... His name is too similar to Sturgis Kaval or whatever it was to be a coincidence! |
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sannihunSigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 10/04/05
Finally some action! But I'm worried now... Everybody's taking precautions so that no one dark get onto the school grounds… Well, what If they’re already there? |
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sannihunSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 10/04/05
Aahh.... tense right now…. I’m wondering, is it Wormtail under disguise as one of the recruiters at Hogwarts maybe? And really… I should do my homework now, why are you doing this to me? Posting good stories like this… How rude!! *lol* |
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sannihunSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 10/04/05
Hmm... mysterious ending there.... who walked away? have no clue! Anyway... no Harry/Hermione action in this chapter, sad... |
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sannihunSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 10/04/05
Aahhh, said it before, I’ll say it again! I LOVE your writing!!! And now Ron’s okay with everything, I like the way this is going. One thing bothers me though… You’ve described Harry’s hair as dark brown when it’s well known to everybody that it’s jet black! I know Dan’s hair is brown but isn’t fan fiction mostly based on the books? Just a thought I had… I’ll go read chapter three now then!...  |
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sannihunSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/04/05
My god! Was the sweetest thing I have ever read or what?! How you portrayed the characters and how they saw each other…. Really, it was simply beautiful!!! I’m moved, honestly!!
Now I have homework to do but that will just have to wait since there’s no way I’m not continuing to read your story tonight here at this moment!!
Keep up the good work; I think you’re an absolutely excellent author!!
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Damn reporters, trying to throw Harry off his game. Or were they really reporters? |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 14/01/05
I REALLY LOVED THIS CHAPTER!! its really well written and wi th a touch of humor in it! |
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syustatSigned | Chapter : 10 | Date : 03/01/05
AWESOME battle scene!! I particularly loved how Harry would not sink to Voldemorts level and use an unforegivable curse. |
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syustatSigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 03/01/05
Excellent chapter. I liked the way you made 'dark servant' rearrange into 'kard starven' on the wall with Harry's wand. It reminds me of CoS. You used that in Covenant also |
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syustatSigned | Chapter : 7 | Date : 03/01/05
Great chapter! Let me speak to your response to my last review. Although this is a wonderful story which has an excellent plot line, I have to agree with you on the point you made of your writing being more detailed now. I'm not saying your writing here is bad (it's way better than mine will ever be  ) but you have improved. I don't know if I'd want you to revise it...for one thing it shows your expansion and growth as a writer. The little mistakes don't hinder the progression of the plot, nor do they distroy the canon of the story (I think is said that right  .)
If you do decide to re-write it, do not change this chapter much. I really felt the fear and hurt that Harry was feeling. It was well written. But I do have one critisim to make. Now, maybe you didn't plan on writing a sequal to this. But now that you did, I know how Dumbledore truely feels towards Harry, and I cant get past him basically telling Harry that he has to go and fight all alone. And when Harry says it's all his fault, the professor should have tried to put an end to these thoughts. I would change that, but like I said, you probably weren't planning on writing a sequal and the story is great so far.  |
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syustatSigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 02/01/05
Good chpater, once again. I wonder hop Starven is going to manage to take Hermione? But I hope you put some H/Hr stuff in before Hermione is taken. |
Author Feedback: Decided to reply to your last review so far. When I have the time, I'm going to remove this story "Forest of Kavan" and totally revise it. I made quite a few mistakes in this one, as it was my first HP fic, and I'm actually quite embarrased by them. Also, I think my writing now is much better and more detailed, whereas in this story, it wasn't so great, if I do say so myself. I do hope you enjoy it though, if only for the fact that it's the prequel to "Covenant of the Triangle", and you'll get a bit of backstory in reading it. There are some things that happen in this story that foreshadow what happens in "Triangle", and I think reading backwards like you are, you'll probably find them. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, you have no idea what it means to an aspiring author, even though this story is probably more in the "suck" category than "Covenant of the Triangle". Hee hee. |
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