aditivatsSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/08/08
I have just started reading this story and i m simply loving it. Thumbs up for u |
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JimmyUnsigned | Chapter : 11 | Date : 20/07/07
I in joy your story a lot! Please keep up the great work! Jimmy |
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KellyUnsigned | Chapter : 11 | Date : 04/01/07
Hello. Love the story. I see there is a "sequel". Is there going to be any work done on that one? The last update was April of 06 and I am curious to see how the story ends. |
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Very good story. I love the way you express Harry's and Hermione's feelings good job. |
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i love it! first chapter was very good! i am adding this to my favorites so i can continue reading it! i can't wait to catch up to your sorta sequel to this! very good job so far and i will leave more reviews soon!
love,
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i love it! first chapter was very good! i am adding this to my favorites so i can continue reading it! i can't wait to catch up to your sorta sequel to this! very good job so far and i will leave more reviews soon!
love,
danfan4ever |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 11 | Date : 29/01/06
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 lovely! dat was a really great story! its alredy late but i cudnt stop reading it! bloody hell! *lol* amazing story!!! |
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An excellent ending to a very good story. A very interesting new power for Harry, and a nice H/Hr roll up at the end.
Roll Tide! |
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Much better. I see a distinct improvement, and tying things together quite well.
Though, I'm curious as to how much guilt Ginny is feeling for leaving Hermione alone, and Hagrid for being hungry and sending them off in the first place. |
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So far a very enjoyable story, and everyone seems to be in character.
Though you did hit upon the ultimate pet peeve of mine. Breaking the fourth wall. Please refrain from using cutesy authors notes or comments in the body of the story. It's horribly distracting, and brings the reader out of the story.
Like in the following line:
(I don't mean they went that far! ;0) ) Especially with the use of IM emoticons.
Please do continue the very good writing, and I very much like the tale you weave, but to me that one thing is the Crucio of writing. |
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lzodSigned | Chapter : 11 | Date : 15/05/05
Oh my, now we have to wait for Voldie to get another body. Well huh, should be interesting to see how he can do that.  Hope your sequal comes along great, can't wait to read it.
Lisa |
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sannihunSigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 11/04/05
Ahhh! I forgot to review chapter 4 earlier! sorry! This was a good one as well!  |
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sannihunSigned | Chapter : 11 | Date : 11/04/05
Wow! What an ending!!! Really great, and Madame Pomfrey is her ordinary muttering self. Don’t we love her? *lol* Cute how they revealed their love for each other. Pure love at sixteen… Now why couldn’t I have had that? *grins*
Thanks for a marvellous story, I’m going to read the sequel straight up! Wonder what I’ll do when there are no more written chapters for me and I’ll have to wait just like everybody else… oh well.. *sighs* I guess that day will come as well!
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