Rather a sad ending, but great story. Your closing notes causes one to think. Nicely done.

hmmm, that was a very interesting story, disturbing in many many ways but interesting as well. I couldn't stop reading, i had to get to the end and may i say i didn't really see that ending coming. i thought it would be more like happily ever after, but those don't usually happen in the real world do they? great job in writing.

Wow. I'm a little confused.....this was a powerful story, full of unbridled anger and raw emotion. Poor Ron...poor Ginny....poor Harry and Hermione. But, definitly not a poor story.

Simply the best I have read in a long, long time.

Bravo.

*applauds slowy then faster and louder while yelling'bravo'* wow. wow. wow. awesome! keep up the excellent work and i especially love the ending !

Wow, that was really captivating. It's certainly a different take on everything, thank you for writing it!

Nope you got me on this one and it was excellent work! Great but sad wrap up. Thanks for sharing this tale, looking forward to more in the future!

I don't know why you hate this, I think it is interesting and intend on reading it all.

Eej :/ Really dark indeed. Sorry about what happened to you. Writing just expresses inner feelings, it's the same for me. I hope you'll get better soon and write another story. If it matters, this one was really great, as usual.

It's a bit sad, the ending, but I guess that just had to be.

Goldgrin

Never a truer statement spoken. I'll admit, I didn't expect this ending, but it was everything I could have hoped for. You have done your title of 'master of angst' justice. I give you my applause and compliments. Well done.

-G.S.


Remember one thing though. The destination is never one that is to be expected. That makes for a boring story, a boring tale, a boring life. It is the unexpected that makes us who we truly are, and we thrive from it. Remember that closure always comes eventually, whether it be in the form of love, or death, or something greater. But just as no peace can last forever, neither can despair. Time eventually heals all wounds, and though we never forget them, they make us stronger in the end.

I'm not sure I liked this story. I'm not sure I understood all the symbolism. I'm not sure why you killed off Ginny. I'm not sure about a lot of things.

I am sure this was a damn well crafted story.

It felt like a dream, and all I can hope is that like most dreams, I will forget its bittersweet brilliance come morning.

Kudos.

I Know what you mean the person that ment the most in my life died last night so I trully hope that that something must make sense.

Great job, excellent concept of the afterlife. Amazing how the two of them still got together. I had thought Harry had died. They must have given the remains of their souls or what society thought of as their souls, in order to defeat Voldemort. I really like the fact that they are still alive together.

Oh my.................
*Silence*
What can I say? I am startled beyond belief. But you're right with this ending. That is the only way Harry and Hermione can live...especially with Hr gone mad. They can't be normal together, normal as we see it. I feel bad for Ron and terribly sad for Ginny. Good story all together. Very good.