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what a pleasant story - and so true to how people are afraid to just talk honestly with one another - great job and very nice description of Hermione
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Author Feedback: Thank YOU - for the review! I think people often don't worry reviewing an "old" story but I do check back regularly to see if anyone's left one - I love reading them!
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Horny, drunk Hermione is quite entertaining, especially when coupled (ok, sorry for the pun) horny Harry. Glad they finally put themselves out of their misery. |
Author Feedback: Thanks for reviewing! I think people that don't usually drink, given just the right amount - not too much! - can be rather funny and uninhibited! Well, I suppose it's really that it's amusing for everyone else because they usually don't remember anything! Anyway, thanks so much for the review - it's appreciated!
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davidUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/01/05
hey,
i loved your story. i have read lots of good fan fic before but this one was the best i can remember. some of the phrases you used in it were ones that i was sure that only i used. like "by hook or by crook" i have never heard anyone else use that. and your writing style it was almost like reading my own. any way i just wanted to tell you that i thought it was really cool. i dont usually do this but on the off chance that you might ever want to talk books, fanfic, or harry potter then just drop me a line @ Dshelln@hotmail.com  |
Author Feedback: Hi David!
Thank you for your lovely review! I clicked on your name but it only brought up Outlook Express. Do you have any fics on Portkey or elsewhere? I'd be interested to read them. Ha! Imagine that - you using phrases like "by hook or by crook" as well! I actually never gave it a second thought at the time - it just seemed to fit. I have to say I mainly only read at Portkey - I have been to a couple of other sites, but since I was, without realising it until I found Portkey, a H/Hr shipper, Portkey is my favourite. I have posted most of my stories over at Fiction Alley too (under Lady Jane) but it's a very different place to Portkey and I've always been more comfortable here. As for Harry Potter...I have been a total bookworm since I was 8 years old and read my first novel on Christmas Day in four hours straight and I've read and re-read a LOT of books but the Harry Potter books really take the cake! I couldn't even tell you how many times I've read them all (I'm actually re-reading OOTP at the moment). Can't wait until the 16th of July!!!!
Thanks again for taking the itme to review!
Ciao,
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trutonksSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/01/05
 yeesh, that was awesome! I love your writing. The apparating scene made me laugh  great job. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/12/04
lol good story... Hehehe... well done... by the way, whos your BETA reader?  |
Author Feedback: Hi Anon and Merry Christmas!
I am my own beta reader - wouldn't trust anyone else! Mind you, I've found a couple of little mistakes over my various stories AFTER I've uploaded them which freaks me out but I've managed to move on...lol!!
Glad you enjoyed the story and thanks for reviewing!
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wow ohh what a night really really wicked story funny and sexy its a really good idea i really liked mione pov so totally neddy of harry and though it would benn nicer to see a bite more on harry´s pov the few line u trow in are really good, will u make an other fanfic base on these one or this is just once in a fic life ?????
i really liked keep the good work. |
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i liked this story. it was a very interesting read. mainly because it was a Harry/Hermione fic who know but it was really good. |
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Hi! I thought the story was great! I loved how Hermione kept on thinking about her action and next moves. But i do believe that it needs to be down graded for I didnt really find it so NC-17ish. And that the spoiler should be 1-4 for Luna wasnt in the fourth book, i think! Anyway all and all it was a great story and i found it kind of funny. And also i like that there wasnt to much of a sex scene in this too and it had the right amount of sexual concept. Great Job! Hope you right some more and I'll check out more of your story!  ! |
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Awesome, awesome, awesome, I hope there will be more chapters as their relationship develops |
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Nicely done, I had a good time reading this. Perhaps you should create chapter 2 soon, it looks like your readership is clamoring for more. I believe you could write the perfect shag-scene for Harry and Hermione. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/10/04
NOOOO!!! YOU TURNED ME ON....AND NOW WON'T FINISH!!! *flails in agony* |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/10/04
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hammergalSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/10/04
Really great story but come on, girl, the reviewers have spoken, give us some sex! You know you can do it! |
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jchaserSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/10/04
Great story...the way you wrote her thoughts made her seem so real. Hope to read more from you. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/10/04
That's more R than NC-17 but it's still adorable! Keep going! |
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