A little bit short, but otherwise, nice work. You should continue and tell us what they get up2 later hehe

I like this story. It is so simple, so Harry and Hermione. Short and sweet.

If I didn't know any better I'd say you were JKR herself.

I loved it obviously! Great Job!

hey! This story definitely has a great start! It really draws ur attention and it makes me want to keep reading! Keep it up(btw ur other story-HP and the circle of oblivion is coming along really well 2!!)
Ana

I really must thank whoever thought of putting the little box at the bottom of the pages ... makes it easier to jump from one story to the next ...

Although, truth to tell, it makes me want to drown myself in a pail ... I've been focused *too* much on one story, never thinking that there may be others you've written out there ...

All of them as lovely as the one I first started reading.

Forgive me, please?



gil

P.S. I truly loved this one.

Very cute and sweet. It was short, but still made me feel all tingly inside! Great job!

awwwwww that was cute! that could have been in the book and not have changed a thing, and that's what i love about "missing scenes." great job!

I really enjoyed this because it really could fit into the canon... but you know, this this an excellent setup for a fic that would turn AU, of course. I think you should give it a shot.

Although this ficlet is kind of short, it's very sweet and quite plausible.

How sweet! I love how Harry watched her go in after their talk. Makes my heart go pitter patter.

Yes, this is a very nice chapter I hope this isn`t going to go slow, but either way good job, when does the next chapter appear?

It was short and sweet. I could easily see it fitting into the Yule Ball chapter. Write more, please!

Wow! Great short piece here. I loved the talk you had between harry and herms and her thoughts as she left the ball and the ending was just so well done! Kudos!

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHhh!!!!!!! you can't leave it like that!!!!!!!!!!! Please add more and more and more mwahhahahaha sorry im a crazed addict of Harry and Hermione fanfictions!!!!

aww....please continue! i liked how harry said she was pretty and stuff! cant wait for more!