AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/10/04
This By Far is One of the most soul like Fluff Stoies ive Read And Enjoyed |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/10/04
not to be rude or anything but this stunk on ice.some of the parts are good but then some are not.if this hurts your feelings i'm really sorry. i'm a really nice person, but when i have something to say i say it loud and proud. |
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It isn't rubbish. You should completely continue. Continue, continue, continue! Now please! |
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reinaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/10/04
' Breath out so I can breath you in' Is a quote from Foo fighter's song Everlong. Very good Fan fic. I love the song and that is the top quote from the song. |
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willowUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/10/04
What can I say...that was just so beautifully written!!!  I look forward to reading more of your stories soon  |
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psymonSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/10/04
good good good good good good good good good good good |
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that was so sweet! i loved it not too much for a lemon but just enough sweet fluff!!  |
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tanamaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/10/04
I thought this piece was utterly sweet and adorable. Just a beautiful little interlude. Nicely done. |
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KatakaliUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/10/04
Rubish?  How you dare to even ask?
This is one of the most poetic and truly beautiful fic I´ve read in a looooooooong time. Loved it!
Wish you could write how they got there in the same style, which is evocative, fresh and very well done.
KUDOS TO YOU!
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FacadeSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/10/04
Beautiful. God I love ficlets like this that make me marvel at the prose. Wonderful. |
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It wasn't rubbish at all!! Quite charming, quite different, with the whole Harry isn't-a-gorgeous-hunk idea, and their interaction. Definately unique, therefore i loved it! |
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Wow, I really loved this alot..it wasn't your "typical" romance type stuff, which made it more special I think.
I also loved your visuals, I could clearly picture it all  |
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Lily JaneSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/10/04
i love this story
It's very cute and romantic in it's own way.
Can you please write another chapter???  |
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Very nice imagery; intriguing, and leaves you wanting more, hallmarks of good writing. I liked the picture you painted of the storm, the description of the room, the oversized shirt, etc. The only thing that seemed off in the whole piece was the use of the word 'conveniently' to describe Harry's burdens; that was a bit jarring. Other than that, I thought it was very well done. |
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