AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 04/04/06
 So... so beautiful! You have officially converted me to a Harry/Hermione shipper! |
| |
|
This is really good. This is my favourite type of writing. Whenever I read poems, fan fictions, short stories, novels, plays or wahtever, my favourites are the ones with sad endings or sad scenes. It takes a great deal of talent to write sad scenes that truly effect people. If it effects me, it's not cheesy and it's believable I love it. This proves that you have a great deal of talent, and an excellent choice of words. I hope to read more of your sad fan fictions. Keep writing! |
| |
MissLexiSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 19/12/04
Wah!!!! You killed Harry! Great story though. You had a good plot and the writing was excellent. |
| |
|
|
Author Feedback: Read my other story called There are no Happy endings and you'll find the answer to your question |
| |
|
That was sad and very good.Please just keep up the quility(spelling?) for writing you have shown with this story. |
Author Feedback: Thanxs for your review...and it's quality |
| |
AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 10/10/04
I loved this story. Diamond is a girl's best friend, so you did a great job with the gift buying. I can't wait to read the final part!!!!!!!!!! |
| |
AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/10/04
Whoa, I would have never thought that Harry would feel that way towards Ron. That was a huge surprise to me b-cuz in other fics, they just make Harry a goody-two-shoes. Completely Unique!!!!!! |
| |
AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 09/10/04
i love this and the companion cant wait 4 the next update!!! |
| |
|
It's really nicely written. I could see Ron growing up and becoming that arrogant and self-centered. Nothing's his fault, it can't be. Well, I can't wait for the next one. |
| |
NatePSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 09/10/04
|
| |
willowUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 09/10/04
Awww that was so sweet I`m so glad Hermione came to see him because he was so sad all alone! Update really soon please |
| |
willowUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/10/04
I really enjoyed reading this story please update really soon with the next part I can`t wait to read it |
| |
|
Well as you suggested to the other reviewers, I read "There Are No Happy Endings" after I read "Even Heroes Bleed." I hope you're happy now, I have tears in my eyes. I've read several pieces of fanfic here at portkey.org, but your use of the first-person perspective in story-telling is the best I've seen. Even though I now know how the story ends, I would like to see it from Harry's perspective. I have yet to see a depiction of the Final Battle between Harry and Voldemort. I would be interested in seeing how you handle it particularly in first-person perspective. Please continue to update "Even Heroes Bleed" at your convenience of course. I'm now off to go read more of your work. |
| |
|
|
Author Feedback: Like I told the last person if your interested then read the companion piece "There are no Happy endings" but be warned |
| |
AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/10/04
 what did he do? UPDATE FAST! I want to know.... NOW! Definitly make another chapter to this! Not alot... just like 2 or 3 depending on how you do the 2nd one. |
Author Feedback: I'm decorating at the moment will be a day or two before I update...but If your curious read the companion piece "There are no Happy endings" |
| |
|