Aww, that was adorable! Very sweet ending. I love how you chose to keep Hermione's Dark Mark; it was a good choice. Life can't just be erased.

Oh my! A cliffie! Good thing I'm reading this when thenext chapter is already up, so i don't hve to wait. I just have to hit that little review and jump to next button. So, away I go!

Oh, yay.A well written version of a semi-cliched concept. Thanks! I hate stories where everyone just goes all "OMG I HATE HER SHE EVIL!" and then never ever question it. This is so much better. Congratulations!

oh that was soo sweet at the end. I loved the complexety of this chapter! amazing! and the "Harry didn't believe her because he loved her. He loved her because he believed in her."

was just brillient! Amazing! loved that! And it was great how hermione slowly worked out how harry felt and figured out what he was thinking too, great stuff! i'm loving this fic! please update soon!

Funvince, you make a person cry. This is one of the most action packed, plot pushing, emotionally satisfying 3 part fics I've ever read.

The only thing I have to say is that I'd like another!

I've never read a fanfic where Hermione has betrayed Harry and is discovered with a Dark Mark. Do you have any good ones to recommend?(I'm fairly new to the fandom I wouldn't know where to begin looking!)

Awww, that was sweet. Dark and a little bit creepy and disturbing, but sweet none the less.

Good story- good work, i just wish there was a little more romance :-p

Bravo!!! I simply LOVE tis!! Its GREAT!!!
Woohoo!! hahaa.. I was worried for a moment its gona end at Chapter 1... Thank goodness you continued!! ^_^ Looking Forward to more of ur fics!!!

That is so beautiful. Frankly, this is my first "Hermione traitor" fic and it was only after I read your AN that I found out there are many of them out there. I'm pretty glad your summary didn't say anything about Hermione being a traitor or anything like that, or else I might not have read this, because while I don't mind the concept at all, the sensational quality of such a summary would have turned me off. Anyway, I love this story because it's so full of realistic human emotion. You didn't rush into any of it. I'm always glad for authors who aren't afraid to use words. Lol, if that makes sense. Too many writers (or rather--wannabe writers) rush through things, as if writing their own story were boring. Your careful attention to the important details is what truly makes this story wonderful. Thanks for sharing and keep writing.

Excellent story! I loved the interactions between the trio and the realism of trust and doubt. I feel that this should be expanded a bit, but as it is, it is a splendid fic. Thanks!

What I don't understand is, how can she not be innocent? Not to poke a hole in your defenses, but Dark Marks are customarily on the Left Arm, not the Right. Just something that had me baffled earlier. I love the story though. Now I'm off to finish it!!!! --Sage

Fantastic story so far; exceptionally well-written. There is a natural flow to the dialogue and the characterization are pretty spot-on. Well done!

Fantastic story so far; exceptionally well-written. There is a natural flow to the dialogue and the characterization are pretty spot-on. Well done!

Ah, only just discovered your two wonderful H/Hr stories here on portkey (thanks to danielerin for telling me you were here). I'm just making this 'review' so I can add you to my e-mail alerts list (the mechanism for doing so without a review has never seemed to work for me).

While I'm here, I'll summarise my reviews of these stories as I posted on fanfiction.net - wonderful. Brilliant. Must have more. Please. Stories with this level of complexity, introspection and analysis of the Trio and H/Hr are very rare.

(Have Starfire fly past this big Scottish castle if you must, but it would be great for you to direct your muse back Hogwarts way!)

Thanks again for these two stories. Brad.