...that was so beautiful. That was so beautiful - I cried. I-I'm still in awe. That was magnifacent. I'm still crying

Very good, You should wright more. I loved how there wasnt an,'' o i ove harry, i love you hermione, but we cant but we must'' very real every nice

GREAT ffc,that was so GREAT and SWEET i just love this ffc it was really AMAZING

I really liked this story! I'm not very good at giving reviews, but this story was really good..

That was simply romantic! I can see why you are voted for new author! *sigh* Very good! Loved it!

Not bad, not bad at all.

Why have I not read this in the very beggining? I love it. It flowed very well and it made my heart do a little flip flop.



Hope more work will come to.

Cheers, blaze

Oooh...very nice ending. Didn't seem to be a lot of background behind the story though. When did Cho/Harry and Neville/Hermione hook up? You don't have to actually write it in there, but it has to seem as if there was a foundation and it just didn't come out of the blue. Other than that, it was great. Good job!

Brilliant and beautiful. Nicely done!

That left me feeling so good. I came here through Ms Scribe's LJ and am sitting here in tears about a lot of things,(I think starting with her "angry poem"), but really proud to be a woman. If I understood correctly, this is your first fanfiction? I hope so much we'll see a lot more from you, and I will certainly look forward to it.

~Ash

Sweet and lovely.



You have done well, young smut bunny! Please keep it up. I look forward to seeing more of your work.

Holy crap that was awesome!!!

That was soo great! I absolutely loved it. It was so sweet and just fantastic.

Stephani: I have the feeling that you might be a bit jealous...

your story was pretty cool, but i have a feeling that your capable of better..