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ON!!!! I've Been waiting for months, and i've been gone for twenty days. ow long does it take to update a wonderful story!?!

Oh the H/Hr thing..that would be great i always like that chucked into a centured D/G fic...

Why Harry's Persepective why not Hermione's instead unless you would prefer it that way for a reason...or both. That would be interesting i'm already interested in how your going to use the other persons perspective.

Anyway this fic is awseom at first when Draco thought the whole Chamber of Secrets thing was wrong to do to an innocent i thought..oh no what has the writter done made him nice. But then i noticed that he just had some moral values and he was still his sadistic self which we all love and want to see more.

So you got the characters down pretty well which many people fail to do...i love this fic i hope you keep writting its fantastic can't wait for the next chapter.

Oh and personally i didn't think that Ginny seemed bitter i thought she seemed to nice....lol. With the whole shyness thing to Snape but that would make sense wouldn't it she's still trying to come to terms with what happened while she was with Tom in the chamber. You got the right aspects obviouslt i don't....lol. But hey i'm not the one writting this. Your doing a great job.

Cheers.

bah to the H/HR, but i like your Ginny and Draco so far.

I like the way you pictured Draco, and I like the whole chapter! Update soon!

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Nad

Definitely, I'm curious about this story! This chapter is well writen (I can't tell a lot about grammar and that kind of stuff, english is not my mother language, sorry), with a bit of suspense,I just think that You could have talk more about the relationship between Tom and Ginny but I want to know what will happen next!So, I'm going to read the next one right now!


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Nad

good chap! you're really not a bad writer and the plot line so far is awesome! but i think you should have showed ginny telling tom more of her secrets. keep writing and update soon!

I loved your beginning. It was very well written. Full of suspense. Good Job.

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