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It was cute, and fluffy, but adorable anyway, and I really liked it. |
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Well, that was just lovely. Just what I needed, late at night, when getting ready to log off: I short but sweet fluffy-fluff story. Wonderful. |
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"can i keep you" - that was such an adorable thing to say. yay for fluffy stories |
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i never really wuite know what to say in reviews but i know they are appriciated so here goes. that was wonderful! really amazing writing here! keep it up!  |
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ahhhhhhhhh so cute and nice and well i so liked the part ohh well i´ll quote you ¨ She grinned, “Oh, that.” Harry nearly laughed at her clueless ness and nodded.¨ i´m like that really my first kiss it was something like that so it brings memorys and makes me relly fond of these fic. and plus its really sweet.
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This was absolutely wonderful. I loved that Hermione was so clueless. Great story. |
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OMG!
that was soo cute! 
I loved it, and he REALLY tried to get her to understand, but she didn't, so unlike hermione... it was really cute. hhr forever  |
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Wow, this was really cute!  I hope there's more. If not, that's great. Just so cute! I've got goosebumps! |
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kaychancUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/08/05
A very interesting read.. yet they seem very ooc now hbp has come out... |
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AlyssaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/05/05
I've read a lot "harry's being a pratabout sirius, and hermions wakes him up, and they end up kissing at hogwarts" storys. But this was one of the best.
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Author Feedback: I haven't replied to a review in awhile, but after reading this a second time i felt compelled to:
"harry's being a pratabout sirius, and hermions wakes him up, and they end up kissing at hogwarts"
I never thought about, but after showing it to my friend (mentioned in my author profile) we both got a kick out of it, since there really are a lot of stories like that out there. Strangely, none of them occured ot me when I wrote this, but I am definately glad to here mine is one of the best.
Anyway, I just loved the way you phrased that, it really made my day...twice.  |
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VERY well done, excellently written! I can almost see this scene being in the next book...
Big 10! |
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Awh! That was completely adorable!  I absolutely loved it! Great work! |
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HollariousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/03/05
Adorable. And I always loved that line from Casper, though I'd forgotten all about it. I had a serious thing for that movie when I was about 11 years old, and now I have a serious thing for Harry/Hermione fluff, so thanks for combining two of my obsessions. Lovely!
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Author Feedback: I do what I can. |
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“You, Hermione, are everything I need.” He prayed that she understood, because he barely understood himself. That was the best line ever! I also love Hermione's question of "Can I keep you?" and Harry's reply. You are one awesome writer of fluff! I want to see others by you, especially that angst that you were talking about, hehe |
Author Feedback: The angst should be coming out within a few weeks, so keep your eyes open!
Hehe, my friend called me the queen of fluff (she is a biased, I admit)(silly girl doesn't believe I can write a proper angst...I'll show her.)
Anyway, I'm really glad you enjoyed it, because that was one of my favorite lines as well. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/03/05
Aw that was a sweet story! nice work! Keep up the writing |
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