ok, um i like this story and i think you should start it up again. but please don't make hrmione like that. she's just too ooc and girly (i'm a girl). and when she says "harry james potter!" i find it sooooooo anoing. please take this into consideration.

i really dont like hermione in this . she is soooooooooo noesy (is that spelled write?)

ok i really don't like the hermione on this. she is so ooc. all giddy and anoing.

Hope you update this soon as it is a very good story one I would like to see finished

Wow. Grate story. I read all your other stuff and they were good to but this one just rocks! Please up date soon. Thank you for your time.

That was a great chapter. I wish you would update again and add a new chapter to this story. I have read a few good stories and this is one of them. Thanks.

you r doin gr8 keep u the good work. nice detail in all the stories

hey, really really good story, You have so many places you can take the story, its going good so far keep it up

uh i hate vernon but i like your story keep writin

Very nicely done just like the Dark Rage. I can not wait for the next installment! I hope that you will keep up the wonderful work! In addition I hope that you will update soon! Very unique plot!

this is good could you please update thank for updating if you do if you do not oh well!!

this stroy is rea;;y good you reallt need to finish it please go because I liked it very much
thanks

Nice story. Will he learn advance magic. Is there a knoloage transfer spell. Maby a time spell. Will he go dark. Will he be harmoine be immortal.

That story was weird...why do you keep skipping around for god's sake I wanna know what happens to Harry with the bruses and stuff...could you put that in the nest chapter of story

This is very good. Can't wait for the next chapter so don't keep us waiting too long.