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jessie179
Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 02/11/06
I really enjoyed reading your story. It was interesting to say the least. Amazing to say the most. Bravo! Bravo!
 

Vickles
Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 06/02/05
Awesome story! I absolutely loved it from start to finish. The ending was definately my favorite. During the whole first chapter I kept thinking "It's just a dream" but by the end I accepted it as reality and then you surprised me!
The only part that I really didn't like was the "girl talk" with Hermione and Luna. It just felt like it didn't fit with the rest of the story.
Other that that one paragraph or so, the story was phenominal, and I really enjoyed it. Great job!
 

sevenofseven
Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 26/01/05
I like the way he professed his love before he thought he was going to die better than when he did it when he woke up. Really good story though, with a nice twist ending. Good job!
 

AmericanMione
Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 09/01/05
I was going to review every chapter as I read, but I was just too enthralled by the story to stop for however long at each chapter to write 9 glowing reviews when I could sum it all up in one word here: Wow.
Admittedly, the ending might have come together a little TOO nicely for my taste, but I'm an angst addict. But it was still a nice ending. I just thougth, with all the angst throughout such an amazing story, there would be slightly more angst at the end, and not so much a "happy ending". But, hey, I'm also a Pumpkin Pie addict. I wish I could think of more to stay in recognition in such a wonderful story, but I already did my lovely summary of "Wow." Nothing else really seems fitting, except maybe wonderful, incredible, breathtaking, or heartbreakingly fantastic.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 24/12/04
Wow. Just simply said, wow. Whilst I was reading this, I cried in some parts , some tears of sadness, others of happiness. So many plot twists and turns, very well written. But yea, wow. This is the best H/Hr love story, I guess that's what you call it, I've ever read.
 

harry4NDhermione4eva
Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 19/12/04
hey great story i really luved it kk i got to go so post to you people later ta-ta bye bye!
 

Malyssa
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/12/04
omg this is so sad but so far its good, cant wait to read more
 

harry4NDhermione4eva
Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 22/11/04
hey! great story!! i really liked it!! i also like ur other stories... lol kk i got to go and read bye
 

DOTLP
Unsigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 13/10/04
Well, I just have to say that this is a wonderful piece of work. It wasn't quite as good as A Hero in the Darkness (okay, so that one just happens to be my favourite), but it came very close.

I haven't read many fics where people could really use angst without the story becoming overly depressing. You did a great job with that. The mind is indeed a powerful place. Nothing is as bad as being consumed by guilt and having your conscience conjure up the most horrid forms of torture. Simply marvellous take on that aspect of the human psyche in this fic.

I think one just has to love Ron and Luna. Quite a couple! *grin* Though on a completely different note, I'm not sure where people get the idea of Draco and Ginny. Eh, to each his own.

To be quite honest with you, I didn't particularly like the way the first chapter was written. It seemed slightly disjointed to me. I believe you could've written it better...like the following chapters. I'm glad I gave it a chance, otherwise I would've missed a very fine, moving story. Although, now that I really think about it, it seems you were portraying the way Harry's mind perceived things -- i.e. rather confused and in emotional turmoil at what he had thought he had done. He certainly wasn't thinking clearly.

Anyway, that's my honest opinion. Hope I didn't offend you. I had no intention of doing that.

Cheers!
Author Feedback: No offense taken at all. I was always unhappy with the first chapter. It was hard to find the right place to start the story. I did intend to make everything seemed disjointed and confusing, but I think it ended up being too muddled. I should go back and rework it, but it's hard to know where to begin. I really appreciate your very positive comments. I also enjoy good criticism. It always makes me get down on myself, but at the same time it helps me to become a better writer.

It means a lot to me that people read my story. It also means a lot to me when nice people like yourself take time out of their life to write a review. It helps make the hours I put into these stories, so completely worth it. Thanks!
 

yekwah
Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 28/09/04
Wow. What a cool story! I loved the ending, especially the bit about Angie. I really ended up liking that deamon, she seemed really nice in the end. And the way Harry and stuff defeated the dark ones was very like what the prophecy said. It just remined me of it when I read that part. I'm not christian, and don't belive in heavan and hell, but that story was very believable. I really liked it! Keeping an eye out for more of your stories!!
 

Scorpix
Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 27/09/04
Such a shame that this was such a short story. I thoroughly enjoyed it for its originality in terms of the setting. It's nice to read something different from time to time. I loved the ending as well. A very clever epilogue!! ^__^
 

Creepy Susie
Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 27/09/04
Hey
i just started and finished this story and it's really good
maybe it's because i am from vancouver so i felt very connected to the story when you wrote that luna's father was in British Columbia studying the sasquatch
did you know that it's illegal to kill a sasquatch in British Columbia
well, if you didn't, now you know
kudos to you
~ Creepy SUsie
 

TheGreatFox2000
Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 26/09/04
Applause. Shame it had to end so quickly, but maybe it was all for the best. I would like to give you heartfelt congratulations on your story. A touch of genius, I must say, especially the very end. An absolutely beautiful story, and I hope we get to see another one in the future sometime. Maybe a sequel?

-G.S.
 

Alorkin
Unsigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 26/09/04
WOW!! Very touching ending. I'm happy to see that Anglia was given the chance she needed. Alorkin.
 

monica
Unsigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 26/09/04
OMG GREAT STORY GREAT CHPATERS THEY WERE AMAZING I LOVED THEM THEY WERE SO COOL AND I CAN GO ON AND ON AND ON1 BUT HOPE U WRITE MORE STORIES BYEBYE!
 

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