welllllllll its ok, you had me a bit confused what with all the mistakes and all, but ot has a realy good plot amd you should add more to it

ohhhh my goodness that is a really good start, I just got a question didn't Lily have green eyes? other than that it is a really good story you got me hooked !

This is a whole new twist, which I like. You make me want to join in the fun!!! Your imagination is greatly appreciative, and I can't wait to find out what happens next!!!

i like the story, i really do, i was a bit confused at the begining, but thats the way u wanted it to be, right? my 1 problem...... lily has GREEN eyes, not BLUE!!!!!!!!!!

When are you gonna update again? This story Is AWESOME!!

please! this suspense is killing me, not literally, but still!

wow
this certainly is a cliffhanger by far
im looking forward to the next chapter!

This story was really interesting to read, with lots of cute little interactions between Lily and James. I really enjoyed it! Keep it up!

COOL! it was so good, are you going to write another chapter?

wow. intense. this keeps getting better and better. i cannot wait till the next chapter! Post soon!

very good story. the classic charming youngman and the adventure seeking ,windswept-by-his-grace, girl. so yes, somewhat seriotypical, but still an amusing, well written story.

That was an amazing story. I can't wait to read the next chapter. it is so cool how you can come up with such a great story. Keep writting and come up with a great ending1

Please please please post more soon! This story is absolutely great

wow .. i really really like your story please please update soon i would love to read more .. in till then later for now

angel

plz update soon i realli like ur stori and cant wait to read the next chapter thankiez