Hope you enjoy un-toasted marshmallows!
Amazing chapter! Dealt with so many issues!
Right, firstly I LOVED that Ginny thought Draco was a stuffed animal when she woke up, though what kind of animal he`d be I don`t know! A dragon? A wolf? I don`t really see him as a teddy!
"his eyes scanning the room frantically in the way only a husband and father can." This paints such a lovely image of Draco and made me go all mushy! (not a hard thing to do, lol)
“If I had taken advantage of you while you were sleeping,” he said, the self-satisfied smirk becoming more pronounced with each word. “You'd remember.” - Ooh! he`s just so cocky and it`s SO damn sexy! You write Draco so well! This trait has obviously been inherited by his son as we see in the line about Pansy`s imperfections -
`Ben shrugged. “But they don't,” he said simply.`
Undoubtedly one of the funniest fanfic quotes ever is : “Are you fucking me?” he asked calmly.
“If I was,” Harry said, smirking lightly. “Your pants would be around your ankles, wouldn't they?
Hahahahaha Thank the Lord neither of them have those tendencies in this fic! That could be a rather different ending!
`Harry put his head in his hands. “God dammit, Ron,” he whispered.` Love it that you`ve once again shown how much they all really do care for Ron! No mention of Luna as of yet... Did they get together in your version of events? Hmmm....
Fab as usual and I look forward to the next chappie!

Oh and I`d also like to take this oppurtunity to apologise for the long-winded nature of my reviews! I get a bit carried away as you can tell! lol