Heh, yes, those twins are ingenious gits, though I can certainly see how putting such an item to catch someone who everyone hates would be an interesting trick. (Say, like Snape. Who'd want to kiss him?)

A fun little story to nudge Harry and Hermione towards one another.

It was absolutly great!!! I love it!!! Wery nice wrighting, intresting but the leters could be biger though. I hope youl wright motre staf like that.

i like it is nice and funny.and it was funny when frded and gorge said that harry had to kiss hermione in the lips so she can move.

fantastic.i loved it so much i laughed soo much while the second kissing part.

Really nicely done! Simple, and realistic. I like it a lot!

Oh my God!I think that this author is amazing!If J.K. wanted Harry and Hermione to get together,then this would be the exact chapter that she would probably use in my opinion!

wow! that is definitely, without a doubt, the best fanfic that i have ever read! im not even exaggerating! your story is soooo well written! it sounds just like something j.k. rowling herself would write! even my friend, an obsessed r/hr shipper, thought it was amazing! me and my other friend, however, say it was truly our favorite story.keep up the good work!

That was amzaing it was the best one I've read in along time!

brilliant, wonderful, astonishing, somebody stop me. But that was really good. Fred and George are the main reason for this event. let us bow down and thank them. Whoo!

I loved this story! Your story will be the first on my favorites list! That is an honor!

it was pretty good. I can not wait to find out what happens next.

Oh, that was so sweet, and fluffy. I love it!

funny stuff, i swear to god... continue your fabulous works of art

Very good
I really enjoyed the interactions between Fred and George, very canon and VERY funny!
You described the awkward feelings the two would have brilliantly!
I look forward to reading more of your work!

Absolutely beautiful!!! Finally, a piece of fanfiction that acurately captures all the characters as if JKR wrote it herself! I am a big H/Hr fan, but have always envisioned anything happening between them starting as more of an "accident" such as this. And what a sweet (and downright believable)accident it is! You gave Harry just the right amount of cluelessness! LOVED Fred and George, and you hit Hermione's character dead on! Great story -- I look forward to reading more of your work.