man...this is one of those one shots that could totally be turned into a longer fan fic. and i wish it was! but i understnad that those are stressful and demanding! just have fun! love ya. oh, and i nkow i havent reviewed to all of them but i'm reading all ur writing and i love them all!

I would love to see more of these 'Universes', would love to see more of Harry, and what happened to Ron, and have Hermione tell me about what led up to this night, and what it was like, and everything. I adore details. Your stories are so beautiful in their simplicity and subtlety, but I'm greedy, I want more.

A really good story and one that I think is very probable in the toll that the war could have on them and the solace that Harry needs from her.

I just have to review it once again. It's perfect. Just perfect. Angsty and heart-breaking and so touching and sweet. Like laughing through tears and happiness in spite of everything going on around. I'm amazed that you managed to sum up in just 706 words the whole depth of their relationship. And their maturity achieved too soon in the time of war.
This sentence: "But the thought of living my life without him convinces me that if he crosses the veil, I'll make sure I'm with him" just took my breath away.
Thank you for this magnificent story.

A truly excellent one shot. Few people can capture Hermione's POV so effectively in so few words, but you have done a fantasic job of it - especially that last line of thought of hers about the whole universe and not caring about what others thought of her. Well done.
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Until the sun sets upon a broken world...
The Shadows

Really nice, good written one-shot. Sadly... I would have love to read more. But it is sometimes better this way... to let hings a bit suspended... Well, another great piece of writting from you. I like the universe you put them into. Mysterious, alarming, but still they manage to rest of all of this... I can only hope to read more of your work soon

This is off to a WONDERFUL start. I hope the following chapters come soon! I love the entire premise for this one. Write soon!!

Ok, you need to add more!!!! i've read this twice and i love it! and you just cant leave it there!!!!!!!!

Carly

Lovely, story. Are you going to write more? As this could became one of those great story. I pread with you to write more, I am sure other people will agree with me. This story deserves ore chapters.

OMG...HURRY WITH THE WRITING...THAT IS SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO GREAT!!!!!!!

"But the one thing I'm sure of is that my universe is pressed up against me on this lumpy bed"

Excellent line. This is very sad, but it has a hopeful ending.

Short and strange and a somewhat darker than the other stories I've read from you... and... I'don't know... it seems like a scene taken out of something, it's not like a finished story... but I like whatever it is ;-)

In a word: excellent! And so very possible. You can't beat a well-written one shot (as long as it's H/Hr!). For me, what makes a fantastic one-shot is that you can easily imagine it going further. Great work!
Lady Jane

PS In case you're thinking about taking it further: go for it!

*Sigh* So beautifully written and brimming with emotion, this is a fabulously well done piece. Congrats.

And Tonks walks in aghast at the sight before her! Quite a nice little one-shot, you know my feelings on 1st person so I'll leave it at that Not a spelling or grammar error to be found (I wasn't looking either) so all in all, wonderfully written for such a short piece Keep it up and do more 3rd person (even if it is limited...)