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The Last Goodbye

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hplove_dgch
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/07/07
Wow! How beautiful! Seems to be just like a poem, it's nice to see a latinoamerican that can write wonderful fics, i'd never met one but your work is awesome
Author Feedback: Thank you very much, I'm glad you like my writing. It has evolved a lot in the past years, but I still love to write with the intense emotions you read in the fic.

Rosali
 

Rebound
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/02/06
hmmm. sad . Strange style, but it seemed to work quite well for it.
 

aracne
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/02/06
very very sad, I hate goodbyes, but I know they are necessary
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/09/04
so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so
Author Feedback: ? confused sorry.
Rosali
 

La_Guasa
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/09/04
The song is called "No me ames" right? of JLo and Marc Anthony:
Dime porque lloras
De felicidad
Y porque te ahogas
Por la soledad
Di porque me tomas
Fuerte asi, mis manos
Y tus pensamientos
Te van llevando
Yo te querio tanto
Y porque sera
Loco testarudo
No lo dudes mas
Aunque en el futuro
Haya un muro enorme
Yo no tengo miedo
Quiero enamorarme
No me ames, porque pienses
Que parezco diferente
Tu no pienses ques es lo justo
Ver pasar el tiempo juntos
No me ames, que comprendo
La mentira que seria
Si tu amor merezco
No me ames, quedate otra dia
No me ames, porque estoy perdido
Porque cambie el mundo, porques es el destino
Porque no se puede, somos un espejo
Y tu asi serias lo que yo de me reflejo
No me ames, para estar muriendo
Dentro de una guerra llena de arrepentimientos
No me ames, para estar en tierra, quiero alzar el vuelvo
Con tu gran amor por el azul del cielo
No se que decirte, esa la verdad
Si la gente quiere, sabe lastimar
Tu y yo partiremos
ellos no se mueven
Pero en este cielo sola no me dejes
No me dejes, no me dejes
No me eschuches, si te digo "no me ames"
No me dejes, no desarmes
Mi corazon con ese "no me ames"
No me ames, to lo ruego
Mi amargura dejame
Sabes bien, que no puedo
Que es inutil, que siempre te amare
No me ames, pues te hare sufrir
Con este corazon que se ileno de mil inviernos
No me ames para asi olvidarte de tus dias grises
Quiero que me ames solo por amarme
No me ames, tu y yo volaremos
Uno con el otro y seguiremos siempre juntos
Este amor es como el sol que sale tras de la tormenta
Como dos cometas en la misma estela
No me ames......
hehe, if you don't understand spanish then you read the story and you'll understand the song, they are the same

11/9=NY
11-M=madrid....
y después que?/then what?
Author Feedback: Yep, "No me ames" I love the song. I translated it so I could post it with the story.

Soy peruana, me gustan mucho las canciones de amor en espeñol; me parece mucho más intensas, but I may be biased, of course, hehe.

Esperemos que no haya un "y despues que", sería muy triste.

Rosali
 

ceps
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/09/04
I love your fanfiction,and I love the song "contra la corriente" of Marc Anthony and Jennifer Lopez.
I enjoyed reading your fanfic...it has so much passion and love, like the song has, and well...it is also sad...but there is love in the air..hehe!
I re-read your fanfiction while I was hearing the song, although it´s the salsa version,it was so sad and intense...
You did a great job And I think you make the song fit so perfect in Harry and Hermione´s life or universe...or whatever you call it!...and I love that...
Author Feedback: Thanks very much!
Rosali
 

happy_daze
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/09/04
Aw, that was heartbreaking. The line of: ’Don't love me… but I’ll always love you.’ Really got to me!
Author Feedback: If my memory doens't fail me, that was one of the two lines that inspired the fic. Glad you liked it!

Rosali
 

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