actually i dont belive there is a next chapter as u did this story ages ago!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and i really like this i like it wen they slep together!

You must have worked really hard on this chapter because i looovvvee itt!!!!

You should write a last chapter. But all in all a great story.

please hurry and update i really like this story
infact i love it your an amazing author

theres a mistake in here its nothing major its just when dumbledore finishes talking to hermione and harry after they get back from the creek, his says "well i better get back to Hogwarts" (something along thoes lines) then he disapparates, remember you cant dissaperate in Hogwarts grounds so..?

is hermiones name realy hermione JANE granger?
if it is what book did JK rowling mention that? hope you help! thanks

Yesss - a multi-chapter story!!!
First chapter - perfect. I agree with you on the point that rushing into the relationship part of the fic is kind of aggravating - these things take time, not two seconds. Thank you very, very much for not making this into one of those fics where Harry sees Hermione and wonders how she turned into such a Sex Goddess, or when Hermione sees Harry and wonders how she never realized what a hot, sexy hunk of man he is. Those stories make me want to scream.
I look forward to reading further chapters!!!

I thought it was going to be an all-year story. well that sucks. it was going good..... you could do a whole year no problem.

Well I have to say, I love your story boy! Really nice!

Good story so far, but what dramaic baggage in Hermione carrying around. She is SO reserved and uptight. I mean, if she is going to go so far out of character to wear a bikini and go for Harry, she should be happier about the relationship.

This was a good chapter but not as good as the one before... It was a little boring.

I really enjoyed this chapter. In fact so far it is my favorite. I love the way you described Hermione in the moonlight.

What a great chapter... I enjoyed reading it thouroughly keep up the great work

i love it! Harry and Hermione's feelings towards each other shows taht they are still teenagers and still get embarassed some times. i cant wait for teh last chapter!

i'm loving this fic please update soon cos i've been on edge wanting to know whats gonna happen