This was great! Hope you continue writing this story! I really like Harry's new look! I can not wait for the next chapters! Please write them as soon as possible!

This was great! Hope you continue writing this story! I really like Harry's new look! I can not wait for the next chapters! Please write them as soon as possible!

good first chap! i liked harry's new liking of swiming. but it had to detailed analises of small things, like him taking a shower. keep writing and update soon!

nice plot u got there. keep p the good work and update soon plz

great start although i was wondering why that Tonks and Mad Eye Moddy were not concerned at all with the cuts that Harry had recieved. And why didn't they get him healed? just curious
always,
manda

Hello there. Good story so far, but no mention of the OWLs, at least not Harry's. As for the pool, who has a salt water pool that isn't full of fish? And who goes swimming in a pool that they just "worked on"? Working on a pool usually involves putting large amounts of chlorine in, and swimming right after that is somewhat hazardous. I suppose that you mentioned that Harry went even when he didn't have to work, so I guess it's ok. Keep it up!

please update as soon as possible.
i can't wait for the next chapter.

Intrequing to say the least. I'd love to know what Kingsly did... er, said to Petunia, though I can guess it was *extremely* unpleasent. I wonder what kind of mischief Harry can manage to get into this year? Also seeing the showdown with the Ferret on the train should be amusing, not to mention violent.

Good story. I'm looking forward to more.

You asked us reader to report errors. Here are two I caught: in the second graph, Vernon "subjugates" Harry to a lecture. Errrr, did you mean to say "subjects"?

Also, throughout the story: no apostrophe in "Dursleys" plural, only if you wish to indicate their ownership of something. In which case, it would be "Dursleys'".

That's all, no more nit-picking.

I'll be keeping an eye out for updates!

Eve

Not a bad start. It is nice to see Harry getting in better shape. How will he keep in shpe durring the school term? Where is the rest of the trio at this time. I hope you keep gogin with this story.

Sorry. for some odd reason it didn't process the favorite thing the first time. Bloody computer.

Sorry. for some odd reason it didn't process the favorite thing the first time. Bloody computer.

Hey! I read the next chapter on fanfic.net! Are Harry and Blaise ever going to be friends? and you said that it wasn't Blaise/Hermione, and can't be becasue this is Portkey, (stipid rules...) But I'll be watching for your next chapter, on both sites! And I'm adding this to my favorites! I love it!

I really liked this. I'm sure many people will be thrilled that it's a long chapter. I have to ask if you're from the South. That Hagrid--bless his heart-- made me think you are since it's such a wonderfully Southern expression!