I absolutely love that ending for some raeson.It is unique and cute especially when she ask 'what was that for'and he says 'ask Colin' with a grin that's was cute.

I absolutely love this story!
I just reread it and it gets even better when you read it the second time!
You know how to capture a reader Kalie!
This is fabulous!

-Nadja

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It was very interesting and cute please make another chapter. Please!

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Ah, how sweet! I loved the ending, it was just the cute, subtle thing, Harry could do! Great job! I really, really liked it. It warmed me from head to toe!

Very sweet, and an interesting way to wake Harry up by showing him what everyone else sees through Colin's pictures.

"His hand reached upwards, absentmindedly brushing his fingers over that very cheek in question."

I thought this was particularly well-done, a perfect "awww" moment.

I saw some technical mistakes here and there, misspellings and commas and verb tenses. They're not huge mistakes, but I'm a nit-picky grammar nazi and it took me a few moments to get into the story. Or maybe it's because I'm not sure you need the opening section at all. I'm not sure what it accomplishes in setting up the premise that isn't there with Harry packing his trunk.

I think you've got a good ear for dialogue; it reads very well. And I like that you matured Colin enough to stand up to Harry and disagree with him calmly.

Good story!

im so excited to read more of your work, i love your writing, i love your style i love everything about it! jolly good job done mate!

Nice yet fluffy, my cup of tea. For once, no for countless times already, including once in real cannon, I love Colin for his little photographic ability!

I followed the link from the lj community harryhermione and I must say that I loved your fic! It carried with it a lot of truth and it was nice and simple. Just the way I like it, not too much fluff and not too complicated.

That was sweet. I love how Colin had all those photos of H/Hr and how that proved something. Great!

Oh, well DONE!! Have the biggest smile on my face ! LOVE the ending - it was perfect!
Lady Jane

so so so so so so so so so so so so so so

Well done! I found this one from the post in the challenge forum, and I'm glad I took a few minutes to read it. Very well written, and a sweet little fic. Thanks for sharing!