Whoa, that was sad, remarkably sad. Oh poor Ron. I feel so sorry for him right now.  You should write a sequel. But overall, great work!  |
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smirfieUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 29/11/06
I do love this fantastic piece of prose. Who'd have thought Hermione and Harry, i never saw it coming! (yeah right?). No, seriously, you should write and drop out of medicine! And please tell Alan that I want my CD back. Thanks for now. Oh, and I do love you. Im mad about you. Dont disregard my feelings before your everlasting passion for writing, as it is slowly killing me like the bite that constrictor gave me during my visit to congo last summer. I must say, in all, you are my sunshine, my only sunshine, you make me happy when skies are grey... |
Author Feedback: Ha Ha Smirfie ma homie... Allan has taken your CD and performed pagan rituals with it. I accidentally walked in on it. It was disturbing. With regard to the writing- I may just di that but you'd miss me too much!!! Who'd wake you for lectures!!!
Power to the harry/hermione people!!! |
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sannihunSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 20/04/05
Beautiful piece! Really sad but wonderfully written none the less! and you and I seem to have the exactly the same taste in music!!! Muse, Manic Street Preachers, Kate Bush... All of them are among my absolute favourites! Do you like Tori Amos as well?
Keep writing! I’m really looking forward to the next update of Cabin fever and rock gigs!!!
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 02/04/05
Great story. The plot was great but sad. I cried at the end of both chapters.  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 03/11/04
I usually try to avoid these kind of angsty character death fics... But I think you just might make a convertor out of me. This was very well written and absolutely heartwrenching... and most of all, memorable. Bravo! |
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a little confusing. So e-mail me and clear it up pelaze. or, u could do a extra chap.  cheerqueen2592
e-mail: wmscheerchick@adelphia.net |
Author Feedback: IamHermione Here to clear up my mess! You're the second person who's told me that this story was a bit confusing. All I can say is that I was a little bit Philosophical when I wrote it. The long and short of it is: Harry is killed while vanquishing lord Voldemort, while Hermione is at home, oblivious to the battle and pregnant with his child. Harry, after dying, finds himself near Hermione, though she can't see or hear him. It's only when she begins to realise what's happened to Harry that he feels himself being pulled away from him. This is the Philosophical bit. I just thought that, maybe, when someone died, they woould be able to say their last goodbyes to the one they loved, but only if their loved one didn;t know they were dead. I know it's a bit off the wall, and I don't really believe it, I just think too much. Anyway, When Hermione opens the door to Ron, she realises for certain that Harry's been killed. And the shock literally kills her- she miscarries and dies in Ron's arms, and is greeted by Harry and Her family who had previously been killed by the dark lord.
I think that's it. Review this again If you want anything else cleared up! Thanks for reading- IamHermione |
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alicia<3Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/10/04
that was awful. i don't mean the writing or anything. the writing was actually done very well . but the plot was so sad. aww.  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 20/10/04
Wow. That was sooooooooo sad. Poor Ron! I felt so sorry for him... |
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Woa. That was, woa. I dont think i've ever read any thing like that before. I loved it. It was a little confusing, but in a good way. The type of confusing htat makes you wonder and then when you get it the look of the dawn of comprehension on your face is there. wow, I can really babble can't I.
Lily |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much! From one Irish Girl to another! It means a lot- I love reviews! |
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No nameUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/09/04
I think u r really good at writing songfics and I hope u write some more!!! I really enjoyed this fic. If u have ever heard of the song 'Holding out for a hero' by Bonnie Tyler (also at the end of Shrek 2) I think that it would be a really good songfic to use since Harry is a 'hero'. I've told some other writers about this idea but not had time to post it as a challenge as I've not had the time to go into detail and stuff. But I hope u will read this and then listen to the song and see what I mean. U can find the lyrics for it on most lyric sites. I really really really hope u will write this songfic as this 1 was really good!!! Hope 2 hear from u soon!!!  |
Author Feedback: I hope you get this reply! Thank you so much for your imput- I really love to get reviews like that! I love Bonnie Tyler! And I've thought that it would be a great song for a fic- Your advice just made me sure! Have you read my other Song fic by the manic street preachers? They're welsh too, like Bonnie- You might like them!
I'll get on to that 'Holding out for a hero' fic very soon! Expect it in a few weeks!
Thanks a million- I love my music sooo much and I'm glad someone approves of me mixing my two passions in Harry Potter song fics. I'm going to write some with my own songs, too- They weren't written with Harry in mind (well, one was) but they fit it very well, I think! I'm an avid songwriter, and I talk too much- I'll stop boring you now!
Thanks again! Love, IamHermione |
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TatyUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 13/09/04
I can't decide if I am happy or sad. I feel sorry for Ron. It's very good writting. Can't wait to read more. |
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Aww...! They met again..! That's so sweet (beside the dying thingy..) Was listening to My Immortal while reading this.. Got me all teary..
I knew she couldn't live without him...
But poor Ron...
I really touching story.. good work! |
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Oh God... That's so sad...
Hate it when the characters die...
But it was lovely written though...
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LORD THAT WAS SAD!!
Wow- made me teary.
In a good way, but I feel so bad for Ron! I love Ron, he really is a good egg, a good seed. And somehow I feel like he's doomed. Don't let him be doomed!
Loved it, but really, really sad. |
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well,well,well, I enjoyed this just as much (or even more)as the first one
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