hey it wasnt h/hr. good,. but not h/hr! keep writing and woohoo

'Hermione pulled Harry so close that their noses were nearly touching.

"What did she mean by kiss?!"'

Poor Harry, Jeleous Hermy

you can't end it there! this has to be a H/Hr story, isn't it? so have a jealous!Hermione or something!

Exactly where is the h/h is this!!? Not only did I not see any moments between them, you made him got kissed by another girl.

Hey there!
I enjoyed the story very much.
It was really amusing the way Harry woke up in Hermione's bed. But what I really missed was the H/Hr thing. It's not that the fic is bad is just...I was expecting more H/Hr you know. The queen got more of Harry that Hermione...that's just not right... but the end is quite funny Everyone was paying atention to Draco while Hermione was more fucused on Harry's kiss. Priceless

what a great chapter, love the last line.

keep it up

I love it its not much written but it is direct and straight to the point

Aw, you GOTTA continue this! It's just too much fun to see how Hermione tries to compete with a queen while Harry realizes he's really in love with her.

Great story!