Sorry if I'm being an ass here but,

Me. No. Get.

it was really cute though, loved the ending. please add more? because it doesnt have much harry/hermione love/fluff

OVER ALL, IT WAS AN...ALRIGHT STORY. THE PLOT WAS GOOD. THE ENDING..LEFT US HANGING AND THATS GOOD WRITING. BUT YOU NEED SOME LESSONS IN PUNCUATION. AND ITS DIFFICULT TO READ WHEN EVERYTHING IS MISPUNCTUATED AND IN WEIRD PARENTHESES. OVERALL. THE STORY WAS..ALRIGHT. BETTER LUCK NEXT TIME.

Very cute ending 'what did she mean by kiss!?' absolutely loved it.

This is a really good story but its ruined by the early ending. Please add an extremely long epilogue or something. I mean you haven't even pointed our imagination in the right direction at the end! Harry could still want the queen! I think she sounds better than Hermione! Hermione can go off with Ron or whoever. Please don't leave it there!!

LOL. I really liked this fic! And that's saying something since I usually hate it when Harry or Hermione kiss (or do anything else with) someone other then eachother. Great fic!

good job on the piece! but you need to get Hermione and Harry together!

Definitely one of the more humorous fics I have read lately. It was rather sly how the Queen was. But it was for a good time, right. I kinda feel sorry for Harry though now that he has Hermione breathing down his neck for that "kiss." Personally, I would love to see another chap written after this to show how Harry and Hermione got through this debacle. I think it would be rather funny to hear how those two get together with the queen as one of the girls trying to win Harry's heart. But I am just one person. Try considering it at least. Thanks and good job.

Very cute, I loved the ending. However, there was a lot of grammar issues that put pauses in the story and kept it from flowing as well as it could have. Other than that, nicely done!

~Vickles

HAHAH HAHAHHAHA! BUSTED! rofl! What a great ficlet. very different, but in a fun, humorous way! Poor Malfoy... NOT! awesome job.

~K.M.

Write more more more more more more more more more more!!!

It can not be over! I will not take it. We need moooooooore chapters!

Please write and update more soon!

ADD A CHAPTER i wanna see what hermione does. PLEASE ADD A CHAPTER.

Great Story! It was very well written! You should add an epi to this! Well anyway can't wait see more stories from you!

heh its always fun to read a great one shot. Absolutely loved it. especially the ending, I like how you leave it up to us to figure out what happens to harry and mione.